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Between the Line- Ink and Echoes
Devansh Basantia
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'The lines between fiction and reality get blurred when your character starts writing a new book.'

Mira Thorne hadn’t written anything meaningful in three months. Not since her first novel, Beneath the Quiet, quietly flopped. Not since the whispers at her last book event about “one-hit wonders” and “promising debuts.” Not since her agent stopped returning emails with the same enthusiasm.

She didn’t tell anyone when she packed a duffel bag and drove six hours north into the hills of Vermont. She just left. A cabin, a laptop, and solitude—those were her only companions. Her goal was simple: finish a new novel. Or at least prove to herself she still could.

The cabin was old but charming: creaky floorboards, stone fireplace, the scent of pine and ash soaked into the wood. There was no internet. No cell signal. Just a landline for emergencies and the low hum of wind curling through the eaves.

It was perfect.

She sat by the window that first night, watching snow fall in soft flurries as she opened a blank document on her laptop. The cursor blinked at her like a silent dare.

Her new protagonist, she decided, would be called Lana. Short, sharp, familiar. Lana was a writer too—haunted, uncertain, trying to escape a storm within her. Mira wanted her to feel real. So she made her retreat to a cabin. She gave her doubts. She gave her silence. She gave her her own breath.

The first line came easily.

“Lana Fletcher stepped into the cabin with the cold still clinging to her coat and a story rattling inside her head.”

By the third day, the story was moving. Lana found herself drawn to a sealed-off space in the cabin’s ceiling—a trapdoor she hadn’t noticed before. A place to hide the thoughts she wasn’t ready to write. Metaphor, Mira thought. Symbolism.

That night, when Mira went to get more firewood, she noticed a cord dangling above the hallway. A pull string.

She paused, heart skimming her ribs.

She tugged it.

A creaky wooden ladder unfolded down with a groan.

The attic.

She laughed—nervously, disbelieving—but curiosity tugged at her worse than fear. She climbed up, flashlight from her phone guiding her way.

The air was thick with dust. Boxes, cobwebs, forgotten furniture. She swept her light across the space and stopped.

There, in the far corner, was a small wooden box. Exactly where she had placed it in Lana’s story.

Her hands trembled as she lifted the lid.

Inside: a bundle of yellowed letters tied with string. On each envelope, the same name, written in looping ink:

Lana Fletcher.

And all signed:

Elliot.

The next morning, Mira called the cabin’s owner, her voice shaky.

“I found a box of old letters in the attic,” she said. “Do you know who they belonged to?”

“Attic?” the man sounded confused. “That cabin doesn’t have an attic.”

“I’m in it right now.”

“Ma’am, the attic was sealed twenty years ago. No one’s been up there since the roof work. Are you sure it’s not a crawlspace or something?”

She hung up, slowly.

She opened one of the letters. The paper was delicate, nearly crumbling in her hands. The writing was emotional, unfiltered, like a man pouring out his soul.

“Lana, I see you even when no one else does. I remember you even when the world forgets. You once said stories were how we make ghosts feel real. I’m still waiting in ours.”

Mira tried to ignore it. Maybe it was a coincidence. Maybe the attic wasn’t sealed. Maybe the letters had nothing to do with her story. The mind bends reality, she told herself. Writers hallucinate structure in chaos all the time. That’s what writing was—finding meaning in the mess.

But the next day, she wrote a new scene. Lana finds an old photograph of Elliot hidden inside the last letter—a man with a kind smile, soft eyes, and a chipped coffee mug in hand. She invented his face.

She woke up the next morning to find that exact photo, tucked into the last envelope.

Mira stared at it for a long time. Her fingers traced the image like it would disappear.

It didn’t.

She stopped writing.

But when she opened her laptop the next night, new words had appeared on the document. Written in her voice. Her rhythm. Her structure. But not by her.

A scene she hadn’t imagined.

A memory she hadn’t invented.

She drove into town the next day, desperate for clarity. The local library was small, silent except for a desk fan rattling somewhere. An older woman at the desk looked up kindly.

“Lana Fletcher?” she repeated. “Oh, that name brings back memories.”

“You know her?” Mira asked.

“Not personally. She lived around here in the fifties. Rented one of the writer’s cabins up in the hills. Disappeared one winter. No one ever found her.”

Mira’s throat dried.

“She was a writer?”

“Oh yes,” the woman said. “People say she was brilliant. But troubled. Obsessed with someone who may never have existed. Wrote letters to a man named Elliot. No one ever met him.”

That night, Mira opened a new letter she hadn’t seen before. It was dated the same day Lana disappeared.

“I’ve read the final page, Lana. You wrote us an ending. But maybe… maybe someone else will start us again. Someone who remembers what stories are meant to do.”

“Stories aren’t just how we escape the world. Sometimes, they’re how the world escapes us.”

The ink trailed off.

And beneath the letter, Mira found one final envelope.

Empty—except for a single sentence:

“Write the rest.”

So she did.

She wrote for hours. Days. She let Lana speak through her, feel through her. She wrote about love and longing and identity. About forgetting and remembering. And about the weight of stories left unfinished.

But she began to notice something unsettling.

She wasn’t just writing Lana’s voice anymore.

She was losing her own.

Her dreams blurred with Lana’s memories. Her thoughts began to sound like dialogue. Her reflection—softly at first—didn’t quite look like her.

One morning, she signed a journal entry Lana Fletcher without thinking.

She tried to stop.

But the manuscript kept growing.

On the seventh night, a blizzard rolled in. The power snapped. No heat. No light. Just the cold and the sound of snow piling at the door. Mira lit candles and wrapped herself in blankets. Her laptop, long since dead, sat on the desk.

But there, beside it, was a fresh sheet of paper.

Typed. Crisp. Unmistakably hers.

“Between the Lines – by Lana Fletcher.”

At the bottom, a single line:

“To the one who remembered me. — M.T.”

Mira blinked hard. She hadn’t written that page. But it was her font. Her format. Her name.

When morning came, the storm had passed. The power returned. And the cabin stood empty.

No laptop. No letters. No attic.

Just one printed manuscript sitting neatly on the desk.

A finished story.

Epilogue

Two months later, a book appeared quietly on the shelves of small indie stores. No marketing. No press.

"Between the Lines" – by Lana Fletcher.

A haunting, lyrical story about a writer who loses herself in the memories of another. Readers called it eerie, emotional, beautifully tragic.

No one knew who Lana Fletcher was.

But somewhere in a quiet town, in the back of an old bookstore, a single copy sat on a dusty shelf. A sticky note was attached to the front:

"Sometimes, we don’t write the story. Sometimes, it writes us."

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