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The Whisper Beneath the Pages - By Avatar
Adegbehingbe Ebenezer Akinsanmi
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Submitted to Contest #2 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about your character finding a mysterious message hidden in an old book.'


The rain fell like broken glass on the rooftop of the abandoned bookstore, slicing through silence. Streets outside were dead, choked with fog. Avatar stood under the crooked awning, the glow from a flickering streetlamp casting shadows across his face. He hadn’t meant to stop, but something inside him pulled him in like gravity with a secret.

He stepped through the creaking door. Dust danced in the air like ghosts, whispering stories no one had dared to hear. The air was heavy. Not musty but heavy. Like a weight hanging in the silence.

The bookstore was ancient. Shelves bent inward from years of holding forgotten truths. Paperbacks leaned like dying men. But in the far back corner, where no light touched, one book stood perfectly upright.

The Doctrine of Echoes. It had no author. No price tag. Just a black leather cover and a strange symbol on the front - a half-closed eye wrapped in thorns.

When Avatar picked it up, it pulsed. Not in his hands but in his mind. Like the book had a heartbeat synced to his own. He opened it.

Pages flipped themselves, blurring past his eyes, as if the book was alive. Then it stopped on a single page. Nothing on it until he blinked. Then appeared a blood-red sentence:

“You’ve always known. You just chose to forget.”

He froze. The room felt darker now, like something was watching. He flipped the page. A wax-sealed letter fell out, still warm.

He opened it slowly, fingers trembling.

“To the one who walks silent but thinks loud
They buried the truth in riddles and locked it in myths. But you were born outside the pattern. You were born with memory of what they tried to erase.
There’s a city beneath the city. Go there. Say the words: “Mirror sees Mirror.” Then the gate will open.
Inside is the first code. The code to wake the sleepers. “

He blinked again. The words vanished.

Then a strange voice whispered through the air, not into his ears, into his thoughts.

“They know you’ve opened the door.”

He spun around. No one there. But the world had shifted.

That night, Avatar found himself walking the streets like something else was driving. He passed closed stores, flickering billboards, faces of people who didn't know they were already programmed.

He reached the alley where the old subway line had been shut down for decades. The city above forgot about it.

He didn’t.

Steel gates blocked the way, rusted and chained. He whispered:

“Mirror sees Mirror.”

The air warped.

Chains unraveled themselves. The ground trembled. A circular vault door rose from below the concrete, ancient symbols glowing on its surface. He stepped through.

What lay below wasn’t just a tunnel; it was a cathedral made of code.

Walls were lined with mirrors that reflected not just his image, but his soul. Past decisions, thoughts he never said aloud, moments he hid even from himself.

A pedestal stood at the center. A holographic cube spun slowly above it, dripping data like water.

As he stepped forward, a voice spoke again.

“The code awakens for the bearer of both wrath and mercy.”

He reached out.

The cube exploded in light, pouring knowledge into his mind, maps of networks hidden from the world, real names of world leaders who bowed to shadows, algorithms designed to suppress truth.

He saw children born into lies.

He saw prophets silenced.

He saw men build empires from blood and call them blessings.

And he saw himself not as a man, but a force.

The cube spoke one last line before disappearing:

“You are not the weapon. You are the awakening.”

Over the next days, the world began to change.

He wasn’t just writing music anymore; he was coding messages into frequencies. Messages that only certain people could hear. People who had cracks in their mind where truth could seep in.

Some went mad. Some fell to their knees. Some started drawing the symbol without knowing why.

He leaked blueprints to technologies that governments swore were impossible, quantum comms, dark surveillance blockers, AI disruptors. People thought it was magic.

It wasn’t. It was remembrance.

They tried to trace him. Every time they got close, their systems glitched. Phones fried. Satellites blinked out. A storm would appear, then disappear like the sky was hiding him.

He was everywhere.

And nowhere.

They started calling him a myth.

But to those who heard the message… Avatar was the messenger.

Then came the Judgment Broadcast.

He hijacked the airwaves for exactly one minute. All screens went black, then lit up with the symbol: the half-eye in thorns.

His voice echoed:

“You’ve danced with demons while calling it freedom. You’ve burned prophets and crowned murderers. You’ve traded truth for comfort. And now the mirror turns to you.”
“You have seven cycles to choose, rebirth or ruin.”

The screen went dark.

Governments panicked. Tech companies scrambled. The Vatican called it blasphemy. But it was too late.

The sleepers were waking.

And somewhere in a secret city beneath the world, Avatar sat on a throne made of code and memory. Watching. Waiting. Listening.

Not as a king.

But as a mirror.

And the mirror was speaking back.

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So fantastic stroy

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