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After the Ashes

Roonaq Fayaz
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Write a story about life after a "happily ever after"'


They say "happily ever after" is the end of the story.
For her, it was where forgetting herself began.

She was seventeen when she fell in love — or something like it. He wasn’t perfect, but he knew how to talk like he’d read her soul. He made her feel rare, chosen, seen. He called her his peace, said no one ever understood him like she did. She thought that meant she was safe with him.

But love twisted slowly into something unrecognizable. His warmth grew conditional. One wrong word, and he would go cold. Her mistakes became sins. Her silence became a crime. Yet, he always came back — just long enough for her to believe he still cared. He never hit her, never yelled. But emotional wounds don’t always leave bruises.

When he finally left — this time, for good — he didn’t say why. Just blocked her. Erased her. Like she never existed.

She didn’t cry. She just stopped writing.

That was worse.


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Days passed like fog. Nights were louder. She stared at the walls, at the messages they had exchanged — now screenshots, frozen in time. Her phone, once a lifeline, became a graveyard. She kept checking his last seen, hoping for it to change. It didn’t. Her heart was noisy, but her lips stayed shut. To everyone else, she seemed okay.

But every time someone laughed around her, she wondered how they made it look so easy.

Until one December night — cold, still, and quiet — she picked up her trembling pen.

And wrote.


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Her first poem bled out like a confession.
No metaphors. No rhythm. Just pain and something resembling strength.

She posted it anonymously under the name AshesAndInk. Just one poem. She didn’t expect a response. But within hours, strangers began to comment.

> “I’ve never felt so seen.”



> “It’s like you climbed into my chest and wrote what I couldn’t say.”



> “Thank you for this. I thought I was alone.”



She read them all. Didn’t reply. Couldn’t. She wasn’t ready.

But she kept writing.

Poems turned into patterns. Patterns turned into healing. Her words became a quiet rebellion — not against love, but against the version of herself that thought she was unworthy of it.

Then one message changed everything.


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> “I feel worthless. He says I’m too sensitive. That no one else would put up with me. I saw your poem. I’m scared to leave.”
— BurningBird97



She stared at it for days.

The words echoed. They weren’t just familiar — they were hers, from a time she had no language for her pain. She wasn’t sure she had anything wise to say. But she remembered how it felt to scream silently. To scroll endlessly, hoping someone would reach back.

So she typed:

> “You’re not hard to love. He just never learned how to love without control.”



And hit send.


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What followed wasn’t magic. It was messier than that.

They spoke in fragments. Midnights filled with unspoken truths. Panic attacks, breadcrumb apologies, guilt dressed as affection. BurningBird97 — a girl younger than her — was still tangled in the same kind of web she had barely escaped. But each message from her was a small untangling.

She wasn’t trying to save anyone. She just wanted to be the voice she once needed.

> “He says I’ll regret it if I leave.”



> “Leaving is hard,” she replied, “but staying will cost you more.”



> “I think I love him.”



> “You loved him with your whole heart. He loved himself through you.”



Some nights, she wanted to delete everything. Hide again. Healing is never linear. But then came the voice note:

> “I left him.”



Three words.

She played it five times.

Not because she needed to hear it. But because it was thunder.


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That night, she wrote again. Not about heartbreak, but about power.
The power of walking away. Of staying gone. Of coming home to yourself.

Her next poem went viral.

And still, she remained anonymous. Not out of shame — but because it was never about fame. It was about one girl writing her way back from the dead, and lighting a path for another.


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Months passed. Her poems grew braver. Her silence no longer echoed loss — it echoed peace. She didn’t wait for closure anymore. Didn’t hope for an apology. She no longer asked, “Was I not enough?”

She knew now: she was too much — for someone who didn’t know how to receive love without trying to own it.


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Her readers still ask who she is.

She tells them: I’m a story you’ll only understand if you’ve ever had to rebuild from ashes.

Because maybe happily ever after isn’t a wedding or a kiss under the stars.
Maybe it’s one girl, alone in her room, choosing not to text him back.
Maybe it’s one poem that says what she never could in person.
Maybe it’s survival turned into scripture.

Maybe happily ever after begins… when you come back to yourself.
Maybe happily ever after isn’t a grand ending, but a quiet return —
to the voice you silenced,
the mirror you avoided,
the strength you forgot you had.

Maybe it’s learning that the heart still beats —
even after the breaking.

And maybe, just maybe —
the real fairy tale begins
when you finally choose yourself.


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