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Waking in the Unknown

Abhay Kushwaha
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'Your character wakes up in a different world. What do they do?'

Title: Waking in the Unknown

I woke up to a strange, faint hum, like the vibration of a distant echo passing through thick glass. The air around me was different, thicker somehow—like it had weight, pulling me down a little with each breath. I tried to open my eyes, but the world I saw wasn’t mine. It wasn’t even familiar.

The first thing I noticed was the sky. A glowing, silver-blue canvas stretched overhead, far too wide and vast for any Earth sky. The clouds, if they could be called that, shimmered and swirled like liquid mercury, bending light in ways I couldn’t understand. They weren’t just clouds; they seemed alive.

I sat up. The ground beneath me wasn’t soil or stone—it was soft, almost like rubber, but warm and pulsating, as if the ground itself was breathing. My hands brushed against it instinctively, feeling its cool surface, but the sensation wasn’t exactly right. It was alive, somehow.

I scrambled to my feet, panic bubbling up my chest. The feeling of being somewhere else—somewhere wrong—was overwhelming. I needed to understand where I was, how I got here, and what the hell was happening.

My thoughts raced, but they kept slipping away as I noticed the surroundings more clearly. Strange, towering structures jutted out of the ground in irregular, almost organic shapes—nothing like any architecture I had ever seen. Some looked like massive trees, their trunks wide and twisting, while others had the jagged angles of crystals. They glowed faintly, pulsing with energy, sending soft shadows stretching across the landscape.

Then, I heard it: a soft click, followed by a rhythmic thrum.

I turned, heart pounding. In the distance, I saw something—no, someone—moving through the landscape. A figure. Tall, humanoid but with a strange grace, their movements fluid, almost as if they were made of the same glowing substance as the structures around me. Their skin—or what I assumed was skin—shimmered like the surface of water disturbed by a gentle breeze.

I took a step forward, then stopped. What if they weren’t friendly? What if this was some kind of trap, or a dream I couldn’t wake from?

The figure turned, and for the first time, I saw their eyes—two glowing orbs of light. They blinked, a quick, deliberate motion, and then slowly approached. No words were spoken, but the air around me seemed to hum with meaning, as if communication was being transmitted through the very vibrations in the atmosphere. I didn’t understand, but I felt it in my bones.

I reached out instinctively, as if to touch the air between us, to make sense of this incomprehensible reality.

The figure’s mouth opened, but no sound came out. Instead, a strange light, almost like a wave, rippled from their body and passed through me. It felt like a deep connection to something primal, like it was tapping into a part of me I didn’t know existed.

Where am I? I thought. The figure’s response was not through words, but through feeling—a rush of images flooding my mind, fragments of a place I had never been, yet seemed to recognize. A place far older than Earth, a place where time moved differently, where beings communicated through sensation rather than sound.

I staggered back, blinking rapidly, trying to make sense of the flood of images. I was no longer sure whether I was in a dream or reality.

The figure stepped forward again, gesturing with one hand toward the horizon. A shimmering path unfolded before me in response, like a bridge made of light.

The hum from earlier increased, but this time it was calming.

I stood frozen for a moment. What did it want from me? Should I follow this path? What would happen if I didn’t?

The urge to explore was overwhelming. It was as though this place was calling to me, pulling me toward something I couldn’t understand. Despite my fear, my curiosity overpowered it. The unknown was like a puzzle I had to solve.

Taking a deep breath, I started walking toward the glowing bridge. My feet felt light, almost like I wasn’t quite touching the ground, as though the path itself was lifting me.

As I moved, I felt the world shift again—like it was alive, watching me, reacting to my presence.

"Where are you taking me?" I whispered, my voice swallowed by the vastness of this strange world.

But the only answer was the thrum of the air, and the promise of whatever lay beyond the horizon.

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