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THE SCARY NIGHT

PRERNA KUMARI
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

It was 10 PM. I was only alone at home. Suddenly I heared a knock at the door. I expected no one at that hour of time as all my family members had gone to attend a close family wedding. Whereas I was supposed to stay at home due to my exam. Repeating knocking at the door scared me to death. A chill went down my spine suddenly, the light went off and this only worsened my fear. Then I saw some shadow outside the window. My heartbeat increased as it was dense dark outside and could not imazine in my wildest thought who could be there. I geared up, gathered courage and reached the window. Slowly I pulled the curtains and looked outside but the shadow was not clear at all and it was not a single shadow but four five shadow. This was enough for me to believe some scoundrels where ther at the door. I looked for my cricket bat, held it tightly and reached for the main door of the living room. Although it was cold winter, I was still down sweat with a sudden jerk, I opened the door and lifted my bat to hit but I was surprised to that it was my family members who had come earlier because of me. I felt relieved and embrassed my mother tightly. That night I slept with my mother. It was really scary night.

MORAL:- BE BRAVE,DO NOT LOOSE COURAGE EVEN IN THE WORST SITUATION.

It was 10 PM. I was only alone at home. Suddenly I heared a knock at the door. I expected no one at that hour of time as all my family members had gone to attend a close family wedding. Whereas I was supposed to stay at home due to my exam. Repeating knocking at the door scared me to death. A chill went down my spine suddenly, the light went off and this only worsened my fear. Then I saw some shadow outside the window. My heartbeat increased as it was dense dark outside and could not imazine in my wildest thought who could be there. I geared up, gathered courage and reached the window. Slowly I pulled the curtains and looked outside but the shadow was not clear at all and it was not a single shadow but four five shadow. This was enough for me to believe some scoundrels where ther at the door. I looked for my cricket bat, held it tightly and reached for the main door of the living room. Although it was cold winter, I was still down sweat with a sudden jerk, I opened the door and lifted my bat to hit but I was surprised to that it was my family members who had come earlier because of me. I felt relieved and embrassed my mother tightly. That night I slept with my mother. It was really scary night.

MORAL:- BE BRAVE,DO NOT LOOSE COURAGE EVEN IN THE WORST SITUATION.

It was 10 PM. I was only alone at home. Suddenly I heared a knock at the door. I expected no one at that hour of time as all my family members had gone to attend a close family wedding. Whereas I was supposed to stay at home due to my exam. Repeating knocking at the door scared me to death. A chill went down my spine suddenly, the light went off and this only worsened my fear. Then I saw some shadow outside the window. My heartbeat increased as it was dense dark outside and could not imazine in my wildest thought who could be there. I geared up, gathered courage and reached the window. Slowly I pulled the curtains and looked outside but the shadow was not clear at all and it was not a single shadow but four five shadow. This was enough for me to believe some scoundrels where ther at the door. I looked for my cricket bat, held it tightly and reached for the main door of the living room. Although it was cold winter, I was still down sweat with a sudden jerk, I opened the door and lifted my bat to hit but I was surprised to that it was my family members who had come earlier because of me. I felt relieved and embrassed my mother tightly. That night I slept with my mother. It was really scary night.

MORAL:- BE BRAVE,DO NOT LOOSE COURAGE EVEN IN THE WORST SITUATION.

It was 10 PM. I was only alone at home. Suddenly I heared a knock at the door. I expected no one at that hour of time as all my family members had gone to attend a close family wedding. Whereas I was supposed to stay at home due to my exam. Repeating knocking at the door scared me to death. A chill went down my spine suddenly, the light went off and this only worsened my fear. Then I saw some shadow outside the window. My heartbeat increased as it was dense dark outside and could not imazine in my wildest thought who could be there. I geared up, gathered courage and reached the window. Slowly I pulled the curtains and looked outside but the shadow was not clear at all and it was not a single shadow but four five shadow. This was enough for me to believe some scoundrels where ther at the door. I looked for my cricket bat, held it tightly and reached for the main door of the living room. Although it was cold winter, I was still down sweat with a sudden jerk, I opened the door and lifted my bat to hit but I was surprised to that it was my family members who had come earlier because of me. I felt relieved and embrassed my mother tightly. That night I slept with my mother. It was really scary night.

MORAL:- BE BRAVE,DO NOT LOOSE COURAGE EVEN IN THE WORST SITUATION.

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