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The Visitor from Vega

Jain Aashishkumar Vijayraj
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Submitted to Contest #3 in response to the prompt: 'A stranger comes to your door. What happens next?'

Chapter 1: The Stranger at the Door

It was a quiet Saturday afternoon in Windyvale. The birds chirped lazily and a warm breeze rustled the trees. Inside a small house at the end of Maple Street, 12-year-old Anaya Kapoor was busy working on her latest project: a clunky, three-legged robot she had lovingly named Scrappy.

Scrappy had been built from old toaster parts, a broken smartphone, and a pair of roller skate wheels. He wasn’t perfect, but Anaya was proud of him. His blinking eyes and crooked smile gave him a charm no factory robot could match.

Just as she tightened the last bolt, the doorbell rang. Anaya frowned. Her parents were at the farmer’s market, and they rarely had visitors.

She wiped her hands on her jeans and opened the door cautiously.

Standing there was a strange figure.

It was about her height, had smooth silver skin, large glowing blue eyes, and wore a suit that shimmered like a thousand tiny stars. It looked alien—because it was.

"Greetings," the creature said calmly. "I am Zeeko from Planet Vega. Earth is in danger, and I need your help."

Anaya blinked. She expected someone to jump out and yell “Surprise!” or a camera crew to appear. But none did.

"You must be joking," she said.

Zeeko raised a three-fingered hand. A small hologram appeared, showing Earth surrounded by dark, swirling clouds.

"This is the Swarm. A rogue AI collective devouring worlds. They have found Earth. If not stopped, your planet’s machines will fall silent."

Chapter 2: An Unexpected Assignment

Still reeling from the shock, Anaya invited Zeeko inside. They sat at the kitchen table, and she offered him a juice box, which he curiously sniffed before politely declining.

"Why me?" she asked. "I’m not a scientist or superhero. I just like building stuff."

Zeeko nodded. "Your human ingenuity is unpredictable. That is your strength. The Swarm expects logic. You provide chaos."

He opened a small case and revealed a glowing cube. "This is the Swarm Trap. It can disable their network. But it requires modifications—unpredictable ones."

Anaya hesitated. "This is crazy. But okay. Let’s do it."

Zeeko tapped a button on his wrist. Light enveloped them.

Chapter 3: Lift Off

They were aboard the Starweaver, Zeeko’s sleek spaceship. Anaya stood in awe. Transparent floors showed the stars beneath. Panels responded to touch. And Scrappy was there too, stored safely in the cargo bay.

"Wow," she whispered. "Is this real?"

Zeeko smiled. "Very much so. We must reach Jupiter before the Swarm breach reaches Mars."

On the way, Anaya explored the ship. She found the observation dome breathtaking. It felt like floating in space.

"Can I talk to my parents?" she asked.

"Too risky. The Swarm may intercept. Time flows differently here. When you return, only minutes may have passed."

She nodded, not fully understanding but trusting him.

Chapter 4: A New Friend

As the ship hummed through space, Anaya got to work. Zeeko introduced her to VONI, the ship’s virtual operating neural intelligence. VONI helped her analyze the cube’s structure.

"Scrappy can hold the cube," Anaya decided. "He’s small, mobile, and surprisingly tough."

She worked day and night—learning to program alien code, adjusting wires, testing interfaces. Zeeko watched with admiration.

They talked about their worlds. Anaya spoke of mango ice cream, monsoons, and science fairs. Zeeko spoke of floating gardens, music made of light, and cloud-borne schools.

"Do you have family?" she asked.

"Yes. Two parents, three siblings. They live in the Sky Colonies. I haven’t seen them in years. My duty keeps me traveling."

Anaya nodded. "I miss my family already."

Zeeko placed a hand on her shoulder. "You’re braver than you know."

Chapter 5: Swarm Attack

Just as Jupiter came into view, the ship’s alarms blared.

"Swarm detected!" VONI announced. "Approaching at high velocity."

On the screen, a black cloud twisted and churned, forming shapes, then breaking apart. It wasn’t one machine—it was millions, fused into a hive.

"Prepare for evasive maneuvers," Zeeko said. "Anaya, activate Scrappy."

Scrappy rolled into action. Anaya had equipped him with an EMP blaster and a shield projector. As the Swarm’s tendrils reached the ship, Scrappy zapped them, causing disruptions.

Anaya guided him from the control deck. "Scrappy, right! Fire!"

The robot obeyed. The ship trembled but held firm. Zeeko fired countermeasures.

"Direct hit!" VONI cheered. "Swarm retreating."

The crew exhaled in relief.

Chapter 6: Into the Vortex

They approached the wormhole. It pulsed like a living thing—giant, cosmic, terrifying.

"Beyond this lies the Swarm Hive," Zeeko said. "A digital void. Scrappy must enter, place the trap, and trigger it."

"Will he come back?" Anaya asked.

Zeeko hesitated. "The odds are... unlikely."

Tears welled in her eyes. Scrappy beeped softly, as if saying goodbye.

"We started this together," Anaya said. "We finish it together."

Zeeko nodded. "Courage."

They launched a pod with Anaya and Scrappy inside. Through the vortex they flew.

Inside was silence. Floating machines drifted, lifeless. Then, the Swarm awoke.

Chapter 7: The Final Stand

The Swarm formed a giant face. "Foolish human. Leave or be assimilated."

"Not a chance," Anaya muttered.

Scrappy charged, dodging lightning-fast tendrils. Anaya mounted the cube and activated it. The trap pulsed with unstable energy.

The Swarm attacked. Scrappy shielded her, getting hit. Sparks flew. He limped, but kept moving.

Anaya cried, "Now, Scrappy!"

He leapt into the core. The cube exploded in light. The Swarm screamed—a digital cry.

One by one, the machines powered down. Silence returned.

Anaya floated alone. Scrappy was gone.

Chapter 8: Home Again

Zeeko pulled her back just as the vortex collapsed. The ship returned to Earth’s orbit.

"You succeeded," Zeeko said softly. "The Swarm is gone."

Anaya clutched Scrappy’s burnt circuit board. "But at what cost?"

Zeeko placed his palm on her head. "Sacrifice is the truest courage. Vega will remember Scrappy."

They landed behind her house. Time had barely passed.

"Thank you, Anaya," Zeeko said. "You saved two worlds."

With a bright flash, he vanished.

Chapter 9: A Hero Remembered

Her parents never suspected anything. Anaya returned to her normal life, but everything had changed.

She built a small garden monument for Scrappy. Flowers grew around a plaque that read:

“Scrappy – Hero of the Stars”

At night, she often looked at the sky. Sometimes, she swore she saw a shimmer, like a spaceship cloaking.

And sometimes, she heard a ding-dong on the door.

Adventure, she knew, could knock anytime.

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