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The Rule of Silence

Mk Tayyibah Areef
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '

“Silence is not the absence of something but the presence of everything.”
— Gordon Hempton




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In the village of Ruhgarh, there was only one rule:

After the evening prayer, no one spoke. Not a single word.

Not out of discipline. Not from obedience. But from a fear passed down like skin — thin, fragile, yet impossible to shed.

The rule bore no written law, no soldiers to enforce it. Yet it was heavier than any commandment, heavier than chains.

Long ago, spoken words had betrayed them. Cries in the night had summoned fire.

It was during the war of betrayal — when neighbors became shadows, and soldiers stormed homes under the cover of darkness, guided only by the trembling sounds of whispered secrets and frantic screams.

They say the flames devoured half the village, swallowing laughter and love, and in the ashes, the survivors stood broken — too shattered to scream.

That night, a pact was made: Never again would the night hear their voices.

From then on, the village was renamed Ruhgarh — “the fort of souls,” for only souls could live without sound, and only ghosts could mourn without weeping.


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Zaira had never heard her mother cry.

Not once.

Even on the night her mother’s body was lowered into the frozen earth, the village watched in silence — eyes heavy with grief, lips sealed tight like tombs.

Zaira was ten years old.

She had wanted to scream, Ammi, come back!, but her father knelt beside her, eyes red-rimmed and hollow, whispering fiercely into her trembling ear:

“Not after dusk, jaan. You know the rule.”

And so, she swallowed her scream.

She never asked why no one prayed aloud at night, why the mosque’s doors were bolted tight after sunset, why mourning was a hollow thing done inside bones, never in the throat.

In Ruhgarh, grief was a quiet house — a prison everyone lived inside.

Women stirred their rice with tears they dared not shed.
Men dug graves with hands that trembled but never trembled enough to speak.
Children drew pictures of mothers they no longer remembered.

And the silence — it didn’t soothe.

It grew thick, like fog settling deep in their lungs, suffocating every breath.


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Now sixteen, Zaira had sharp eyes and a restless soul, pounding louder each year, each night she was told to swallow her feelings like bitter medicine.

She carried the silence like a wound, but one morning, the wound bled words.

Behind her mother’s old mirror, wrapped in a frayed prayer cloth, was a letter — ink faded, but the words alive, pulsing with hope and pain:

“Silence is not peace. Silence is a cage.
If one of us dares to speak — truly speak — perhaps the chain will break.
Perhaps the dead will rest.
Perhaps the living will finally breathe.”

Her mother’s hand had written these words.

That night, Zaira decided she would breathe.


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She walked barefoot into the village square — the one place forbidden after sundown.

The ground was cold beneath her feet, the last echoes of the azaan fading into the deepening dusk.

She stood alone, heart thundering louder than the silence around her.

And then, for the first time in Ruhgarh’s long history, a voice broke the dark:

“I miss you, Mama.”


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The silence shattered like fragile glass.

No thunder. No curse. No fire.

But something ancient stirred — a door creaked open.

Her father stepped out of their home, hands trembling as he looked at the stars.

“She used to sing lullabies after the stars came out,” he whispered, his voice cracking. “Before the rule... I still hear them in my dreams.”

Then the tailor’s widow emerged from her hut, tears already falling down her worn cheeks.

“My son died in the fire. I never told him I was proud of him.”

A boy, always silent in the streets, stepped forward, clutching a notebook.

“I write poems after dusk because it’s the only time I hear myself.”

One by one, villagers came — voices trembling but unbound:

A man who had buried his best friend without saying goodbye.
A young girl who mourned the love she never confessed — a childhood friend she was going to speak her heart to, but the war came at midnight and stole the moment forever.
A woman who had lost three children and never once let herself cry out loud.

Ruhgarh began to speak.

For the first time in generations, it wept and sang, broke and mended — all in one breath.


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By dawn, the village looked the same.

The cracked walls still bore their scars.
The sky still stretched vast and indifferent.

But something had changed.

The silence hadn’t been protection — it was imprisonment.

And now, at last, they had unlocked the gate.

Ruhgarh — the fort of souls — was alive again.


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Zaira sat by the grave of her mother, the first tears she had ever dared to shed falling freely down her cheeks.

Her heart ached, but it ached alive — no longer numb beneath the weight of silence.

She whispered into the morning light:

“Ammi, I’m here. I’m listening. And I’m not afraid anymore.”


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The silence that once held them captive had been broken by a single voice — one small, trembling hope — that sparked a wildfire of healing.

Because sometimes, the loudest thing is not the scream,
but the quiet courage to say,

“I am here. I am human. I will not be silenced.”

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I encountered her just a single time at the book market. Initially, I suspected she might be a scammer. I had no idea. Her writing is truly impressive. \n

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Interesting story..50 points from me..\nVote for me if interested..\n\"The secret of a classmate \"

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Loved the story, beautifully written. I would love it if you could also take time and read my story \"Escaping the Devil\". I just entered a writing contest! Read, vote, and share your thoughts.! https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5498/escaping-the-devil

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As said, silence is never the answer

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