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What remains of us

Mk Tayyibah Areef
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next?'

The message came on a Tuesday.

Not a text. Not an email. A voicemail — something archaic, like a whisper from the past.

Aarav had ignored the blinking notification for hours. He assumed it was spam. A political campaign. A scammer. But when he finally checked it, the voice on the other end hollowed him out.

“Hi, Aarav. If you’re hearing this… well, I guess I’m gone. I scheduled this to send to your number in case something ever happened to me unexpectedly. Which… I suppose it did.”

He froze, coffee halfway to his lips.

It was Maya.

Gone.

His fingers trembled as the voice continued.

“You always told me I lived like nothing could touch me. Maybe you were right. But you also said I was impossible to forget. I wonder if you’ve been trying.”

He had. Desperately.

They hadn’t spoken in eight months. Not after the fight. Not after she moved out of their shared apartment with her plants, her poetry books, and that unbearable silence.

They thought they had time. To fix things. To call, to text, to forgive.

But time wasn’t theirs.

“I want you to know that I never stopped loving you. Even when I walked away. Especially then. I thought distance would fix us. But I should’ve stayed. I should’ve chosen to work it through. But I was afraid.”

Aarav lowered the cup. His throat burned.

She had died in a road accident three days ago. He’d found out through a mutual friend's story. No one had called. Why would they? He was the ex. The one she left.

Now she was speaking to him from beyond a digital grave.

“I hope you didn’t spend too long blaming yourself. I know you. You punish yourself more than anyone ever could. But love wasn’t our failure, Aarav. Silence was.”

He buried his face in his hands. The apartment buzzed with the hum of his laptop, the whir of the fan, the ache of memories.

They met during monsoon three years ago. She had shared her umbrella with him outside a closed metro gate. She laughed like she had already forgiven the world. And he, who had been careful all his life, slipped. Completely.

They fell in love over postcards, arguments about movies, burnt midnight toast, and the kind of silence that didn’t need filling.

But then things changed.

Not suddenly.

More like a quiet forgetting.

One day, she stopped asking him to join her on the balcony. Another day, he stopped remembering how she took her tea.

Petty fights. Missed calls. Resentment blooming like mold in corners they stopped cleaning.

Yet her voice still sounded like rain.

“I don’t need you to keep mourning me. That’s not why I left this. I want you to remember the silly things — the time I painted your nails in your sleep, or when we got drunk and slow danced to silence. I want those to live.”

He let out a shaky laugh. That night. God. She played an invisible violin while he twirled her across the tiles in mismatched socks. They’d collapsed laughing, her head on his chest.

The message neared its end.

“There’s a folder on the cloud — MayaFinal.zip. Password is the name of the hill we got lost on in Manali. I left something for you there. Letters, pictures, a song I never finished writing. You don’t have to open it now. Maybe not ever. Just… live. Please. I need to know you’ll live. I loved you. I still do.”

Click.

The voicemail ended.

Aarav sat on the floor, unmoving.

He could hear his heartbeat. And then… nothing.

He didn’t cry. Not at first.

He sat through the rest of the day in that apartment, the sun dragging itself across the walls like time was being forced forward.

By evening, he stood. Washed his face. Opened the windows. Let the air in.

He made tea — her kind, with too much ginger.

Then, after hours of hesitation, he typed the password: Nag Tibba.

The folder opened.

Inside were six video files. Two letters. A recording labeled “for your worst day.”

He played none of them.

Not yet.

But he saved them. Moved them to a folder titled “Keep.”

That night, he didn’t numb out with TV or whiskey. He didn’t text anyone.

He just sat in the dark, listening to the city live.

And then, finally, he whispered,
“Okay. I’ll try.”

It wasn’t forgiveness.
It wasn’t healing.

But it was a start.

He remembered the first time she called him Aarav — the way her voice softened, how the syllables wrapped around his name like a promise. She had a laugh that could shatter the weight of a thousand bad days, but also a quiet sadness she never let him see.

He thought of the nights when silence wasn’t emptiness but comfort, when her head rested on his shoulder and the world was just theirs.

Now, all that remained was the echo of a voice, a ghost of what could have been.

And that message — unexpected, devastating, sacred — had changed everything.

Not because it erased the pain.
But because it reminded him that love, even unfinished, doesn’t disappear.

It leaves footprints.
And sometimes… it leaves instructions.

If you listen closely enough,
what remains
might just carry you forward.

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The grief stays no matter how much we try to remove it

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This is a sad story. Portrayed so well. Keep it up

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Woahh this was incredible beyond words can describe

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