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An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next ?

Harsika Kumari
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next?'

Once upon a time, in a life that felt as predictable as the ticking grandfather clock in her hallway, lived Seraphina. Every morning, she’d wake to the same alarm, sip the same blend of Earl Grey tea, and commute to a job that, while stable, offered little in the way of excitement. Her evenings were a mirror image, filled with familiar routines and the comforting hum of quiet solitude.
One blustery Tuesday, as rain lashed against her apartment window, Seraphina was doing her usual tidy-up, a weekly ritual she approached with meticulous precision. She reached for an old, forgotten shoebox on the top shelf of her closet, a relic from her grandmother's attic. It was filled with dusty, sepia-toned photographs and brittle, handwritten letters that smelled faintly of lavender and old paper. She was about to put it away when a small, ornate wooden box, no bigger than her palm, tumbled out from beneath a pile of faded postcards. It was intricately carved with symbols she didn't recognize – swirling lines and dots that seemed to dance across its surface.
Curiosity, a sensation Seraphina rarely indulged, pricked at her. The box felt surprisingly heavy for its size. There was no lock, no obvious way to open it. She turned it over and over in her hands, her brow furrowing in concentration. Then, her thumb brushed against a cleverly disguised seam on one side. With a soft click, the lid sprang open.
Inside, nestled on a bed of dark velvet, was a single, iridescent feather, shimmering with colors that defied description. Next to it lay a tiny, scroll-like message, tied with a silver thread. Seraphina carefully unrolled it. The script wasn't English, or any language she’d ever seen. It was elegant, flowing, almost musical in its curves. Yet, as her eyes scanned the lines, a strange sensation washed over her – a feeling of deep recognition, as if the words resonated with a long-dormant part of her soul. This wasn't just a trinket; it felt like a whisper from another world, a world that was now bleeding into hers.
The predictable ticking of the grandfather clock suddenly sounded deafening. Seraphina’s familiar routines, her comforting solitude, now felt like a cage. The feather seemed to glow faintly in the dim light of her apartment, and the message, though unreadable, hummed with an undeniable energy. The air in the room grew heavy, chilling her to the bone despite the warmth of her apartment. She felt a cold dread creeping up her spine, a prickling sensation that whispered of something ancient and malevolent. The world she knew, the one she had meticulously built, felt suddenly fragile, its edges fraying, revealing something dark beneath.
What would Seraphina do next? The message, though unread, seemed to demand a response, to pull her into its unseen depths. Would she try to understand it, to decipher the whisper from beyond? Or would she desperately try to seal away the box, to push back the encroaching shadows, and cling to the illusion of her safe, predictable life?

Seraphina stared at the box, her breath catching in her throat. The faint glow from the feather seemed to intensify, casting dancing, distorted shadows on her walls. The air grew colder, and she could swear she heard a faint, rasping whisper, like dry leaves skittering across pavement, just at the edge of her hearing. It wasn't the whisper of a breeze, but something insidious, something that seemed to seep directly into her mind, promising forbidden knowledge.
Panic, cold and sharp, threatened to overwhelm her. Every instinct screamed at her to throw the box, the feather, and the terrifying message into the deepest, darkest corner of her apartment, to pretend this never happened. But another, far more insidious impulse, a perverse fascination, tugged at her. The unreadable script, the resonant feeling, the sheer otherness of it all – it was a dark siren song.
Her gaze fell upon her laptop, a familiar anchor in a world suddenly adrift. Logic warred with primal fear. If this was a trick of her mind, a bizarre hallucination, then research was the answer. If it was something else… well, ignoring it felt even more dangerous. She grabbed her phone, her fingers trembling slightly as she snapped a picture of the unrolled message.
The internet, usually a comforting source of mundane information, felt alien now. She uploaded the image to forums dedicated to forgotten languages, ancient symbols, and even fringe theories about lost civilizations. She searched for iridescent feathers, for strange wooden boxes carved with similar designs. For hours, she plunged into a rabbit hole of esoteric knowledge, her heart hammering against her ribs.
The results were fragmented, terrifying, and utterly inconclusive. A few images of similar symbols appeared on obscure academic sites, associated with dark folklore from isolated regions of Eastern Europe and even some forgotten cults in the Himalayas. One particularly chilling entry described them as "sigils of awakening," meant to call forth "those who slumber beyond the veil." Another mentioned objects crafted from "bone-wood," which resonated with raw, primordial energies. Bone-wood. The box in her hands suddenly felt less like old timber and more like something… organic.
The feather. When she searched for iridescent feathers that glowed, the results were even more unsettling. Legends of feathers from creatures that existed between worlds, entities that could traverse the thin membrane separating realities. Some stories spoke of their ability to grant visions, others of their power to drain life.
As the hours bled into the late night, Seraphina found herself reading accounts of people who had, either by accident or design, interacted with such artifacts. Most stories ended in madness, despair, or horrifying disappearances. A knot of ice formed in her stomach.
She looked back at the box, then at the feather. The faint glow now seemed to pulse in sync with her own terrified heartbeat. The whisper was no longer at the edge of her hearing; it was a low, guttural murmur inside her head, just below the threshold of understanding, like a language her soul already knew but her mind refused to acknowledge. It promised power, secrets, a vastness beyond human comprehension. But it also promised something far more terrible.
She felt a compelling urge to touch the feather, to see if the visions would come, to understand the whispering. But a chilling image flashed in her mind: a skeletal hand, reaching from the shimmering void that pulsed behind her eyelids.
No. She would not touch it. Not yet. Her next move wouldn't be to seek understanding from the object itself, but to seek escape. But how? This wasn't a misplaced umbrella; this was something that seemed to have actively sought her out. The thought of simply throwing it away felt naive, almost laughable. What if it simply reappeared? What if it was tethered to her now?
Her eyes darted around her apartment, a place that no longer felt safe or familiar. She needed to find someone. Someone who understood. Someone who dealt with the inexplicable. Someone who knew how to put things back in their proper, terrifying place. But who? And how would she even begin to explain? The rational world she inhabited offered no answers for a glowing feather and a whispering box. She felt utterly, horrifyingly alone.
The grandfather clock, previously a comforting presence, now seemed to count down to some unknown, terrifying event. Seraphina's fingers, which had so meticulously arranged her grandmother's keepsakes, now felt numb, clinging to the small, ornate box as if it were a lifeline, or perhaps a rapidly tightening noose. The iridescent feather, still faintly glowing, seemed to pulse with an unholy rhythm, mirroring the frantic beat of her own heart. The air grew colder, the shadows in the corners of the room deepening, stretching like grasping fingers.
Dismiss it? No. The feeling of resonance, the primal recognition, was too strong. This wasn't some antique oddity; it was a connection to something utterly alien, something that whispered promises of forbidden knowledge and untold horrors. Her pragmatic mind, the one honed by years of legal briefs and logical arguments, screamed at her to throw the box into the deepest, darkest dumpster she could find, to purify her home with fire and salt. But a deeper, darker current tugged at her, a morbid fascination she couldn't deny.
She moved, almost mechanically, to her study. Her desk, usually a bastion of order, became a battlefield of scattered books and articles on ancient languages, folklore, and occult symbols. She had a passing interest in such things, harmless diversions from her mundane life. Now, they felt like vital weapons in a war she hadn't known she was fighting.
First, the script. She photographed the message with her phone, zooming in on every intricate curl and dot. Her mind raced through the ancient Indian scripts she vaguely knew – Brahmi, Kharosthi, Devanagari – dismissing them all. This was different, more archaic, more… alive. She even tried various online language identification tools, but each search yielded nothing, returning only "unknown characters." It was as if the script itself defied recognition, existed outside the known lexicon of human communication.
Then, the feather. Its colors shifted subtly, hinting at a spectrum beyond human sight. It felt unnaturally light, yet radiated an intense, almost sickly warmth. She held it up to the light, and for a fleeting moment, she thought she saw faint, almost imperceptible veins running through it, as if it were still connected to some living, breathing entity. The thought sent a fresh wave of nausea through her.
Sleep was impossible. The air in her apartment seemed to thicken with each passing hour, growing heavy with an unspoken presence. She kept glancing at the box, at the feather, at the incomprehensible message. Her intellect urged caution, but the primal urge, the sheer, horrifying pull of the unknown, was growing stronger. It felt like a voice, not in her ears, but in the deepest recesses of her mind, a cold, silken whisper promising answers.
Driven by a terrible compulsion, Seraphina returned to the box. She carefully picked up the scroll again, holding it closer. The strange sensation intensified, and then, a shiver, not of cold, but of something else, something entering her. The characters on the scroll seemed to writhe, to reorganize themselves, and suddenly, horrifyingly, the meaning of a single symbol, the stylized lotus, slammed into her consciousness with the force of a physical blow. It wasn't a symbol of peace or purity, as she'd always believed. It was a sigil. A binding. And it was breaking.
And then she knew. Her grandmother hadn't simply found this. She had bound it. The box, the feather, the message – they weren't discoveries. They were remnants of a long-fought battle, and Seraphina, by merely touching them, had just undone a centuries-old ward. The "whisper from another world" was no longer a whisper. It was a hungry snarl, and it was coming for her.
The grandfather clock chimed midnight. Each stroke echoed like a death knell in the oppressive silence. Seraphina's breath hitched. She was no longer asking what she would do next. She was asking what it would do to her.

Written by - Harsika komarashetti
Class - 6B

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