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The Call of the Sea

Parnali Debsharma
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'You break the one unbreakable rule. What happens next? '

Maya was a bright, curious teenage girl who lived near the sunny shores of Miami with her loving family. Her mother was an incredible chef, who ran a beachside cafe and her father was a ever supportive husband who helped and worked with his wife, making sure everything ran smoothly. They were a happy family, except they followed one strange and unbreakable rule: No One Should Ever Step Into The Sea. Not Maya. Not her parents. No exceptions.

It wasn't something they discussed openly about. "Why?" Maya would ask again and again. Her mother would only sigh. "It's just how it has to be." or "Just trust us".

So the sea remained a mystery to Maya - beautiful, beckoning, but was always out of the reach. Sometimes she would feel that the sea were calling out to her.

When her school announced this year's homecoming Week theme, and for the first time it was beach day themed with the highlight being the exciting water games and activities right by the shore. Maya's heart sank she knew what her parents would say. That evening, as she helped her mom pack cupcakes for the café, she asked hopefully, "Mom, can I go to the homecoming beach party this year? Please?"

Her mother paused, her smile fading. She looked at her with her firm eyes." No, Maya. You know the rule. Sorry sweetie but it looks like you won't be going".

Frustrated, Maya shared her dilemma with her friends, who came up with a plan to help her." Sneak out," Lily whispered. "Say you're coming to my place to study. We've got your back". After some hesitation, she agreed. On the day of the event, she told her parents she had a group study session and promised to come home by evening. Her parents nodded and smiled, trusting her completely.

The beach party was everything she imagined- music blasting, kids enjoying, waves crashing rhythmically in the background. Her classmates were in swimsuits, playing water games and splashing in the water. Maya stayed at the edge, enjoying from a distance. That rule still clung to her like seaweed.

Her friends called her over to play volleyball which she gladly agreed to, when the ball rolled away towards the rock. She jogged off to go fetch it enjoying the warm sand under her feet. But then, a scream shattered the moment.

"Help! Somebody please-help!"

A boy was drowning. There was no lifeguard. No one else was around. Maya froze. Her mother's voice echoed in her mind- never go into the sea.

But someone would drown and possibly die if not helped.

Heart pounding, she whispered, "I have to." Without another thought she ran and dove into the water.

The cold hit her like a shock. She pushed through the waves, every stroke powered by panic and adrenaline. She was obviously not a great swimmer. Just as she neared him, a massive wave pulled both of them in, dragging them both under. It was full dark and she couldn't breathe- until suddenly something impossible happened.

Her legs disappeared. In their place was a long, gleaming tail- smooth, powerful and unreal. She looked down in disbelief. She could breathe underwater. She was still alive... and she was different.

She wasted no time and reached the boy and carried him to shore with ease. As they neared land, her tail shimmered- and her legs returned as though nothing had happened.

The boy gasped for air, looking at her in awe." You.....saved me. Thank you but how did you......?"

"I guess I'm a good swimmer." Maya said with an awkward smile, picking up the volleyball.

The rest of the party passed in a blur. Maya stayed mostly silent, withdrawn, lost in her thoughts, replaying the moment over and over in her head.

By the time she got home, she was exhausted, her thoughts were eating her up. Her heart thudded as she walked through the door, not wanting to face her parents but she knew she had to tell them the truth.

Her mother walked towards her giving her a hug, when her eyes narrowed slightly.

"Why do you have salt water breath?" she asked, her voice unusually calm. "Had you been in the sea?"

Maya hesitated, she couldn't lie- not now. She slowly nodded.

Her mom looked at her for a long moment. “Something unexplainable happened… didn’t it?”

Maya’s breath caught. “How-how do you know?”

Her mother sat down, eyes tired. “It's time we tell you the truth Maya.”

That night, the truth finally surfaced.

Her mother was once a mermaid—Princess of the Seven Seas, daughter of Queen Nerissa. But when her mother tried to crown her queen, she refused. She didn’t want to rule. She wanted to live on land, feel the wind in her hair, see the sunrise everyday and just wanted to explore human life. She wanted freedom. Her father, also a merman, shared the same dreams and didn't want the crown, instead he wanted to explore, learn, build something new. They both felt trapped underwater despite how magical it was.

But Queen Nerissa was furious when she heard this and thought that her father had corrupted her daughter. Therefore, she banished them both - Never return to the sea, she had warned, or face the consequences.

“I didn’t want you growing up with that burden,” her mother said. “So we kept it from you.”

Maya’s heart burned. “You didn’t just keep a secret. You took my choice away. I’ve felt that pull to the sea all my life—and I never knew why.”

Anger, confusion, wonder—everything clashed inside her.

That night, she ran.

The moon guided her to the shore. She dove into the sea, her beautiful tail replaced her legs, shimmering in the moonlight. She commanded, “Take me to her.”

The sea obeyed.

She swam faster than she ever thought possible. Soon, she reached an underwater cove glowing with bioluminescence. At its heart stood a regal woman with flowing silver hair—the majestic mermaid Queen Nerissa, who was also her grandmother.

“After so many years…..my granddaughter returns.” the queen said.

“I came to talk,” Maya said, floating before her. “I know what happened.”

“Oh! so you finally know. Your mother betrayed her place and left our world.” Her grandmother said with a hint of anger in her voice.

“No,” Maya said firmly. “She just didn’t want to be Queen. She didn’t betray you—she wanted something different. And you never gave her the chance to explain.”

“She chose a merman who defied me. He manipulated my daughter and took her away from me.” Queen Nerissa spoke through gritted teeth.

“She chose a man who has built a beautiful life with her,” Maya spoke with firm resolve. “He’s kind. Brave. And I have seen how they've longed everyday to be in the sea, which was once their home. But were forbidden to even go near it.”

Nerissa was silent.

“I’m not here to fight you,” Maya continued. “But maybe it’s time to let the past go. To talk. To heal. Please.”

The Queen studied her granddaughter for a long moment. Her anger ebbed as she met her eyes, they had the same curious and bright gaze as her daughter had, she missed them more than she wanted to admit. Maybe it was finally time to talk things through.

“Bring them to me,” she finally said.

The next day, Maya told her parents everything.

“Are you sure?” her father asked. “What if she’s still angry?”

“She’s listening,” Maya said. “That’s more than she’s done in years and I think she willing to forgive you both.”

Together, they returned to the sea. The waves welcomed them. Their tails shimmered once again. Her parents had truly missed the sea, it was a part of their identity after all.

At the edge of the reef, Queen Nerissa waited. When her eyes met her daughter’s and her son in law, the weight of years passed in a single look.

“I should’ve trusted you both,” the Queen said.

Tears welled in Maya’s mother’s eyes. “And we should’ve come back to explain.”

And beneath the waves, surrounded by coral and memory, forgiveness bloomed.

Today, Maya lives between two worlds.

By day, she works at the café, laughing with her parents and watching the tides roll in. But at night, she often slips into the sea, her tail glimmering as she swims through realms most can only dream of.

Queen Nerissa no longer rules with bitterness. She rules with understanding—and pride. Her granddaughter, the girl who bridged the gap between land and sea, who had the same curiosity and enthusiasm as her parents was a amazing princess mermaid and was loved by all.

And if you ever find yourself walking along the Miami shore beneath a silver moon, listen carefully. You might just hear laughter in the waves and catch a glimpse of a girl with bright eyes and a flickering tail, vanishing into the deep where two worlds finally became one.

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