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The Unexpected Message

Aalia Gupta
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Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next?'

It was a quiet Tuesday evening when Mira’s life changed forever.
She sat curled up on her worn-out sofa, a cup of lukewarm coffee cradled between her hands. Outside, the monsoon rain tapped gently against the windowpane, as if hesitant to disturb the silence that had wrapped itself around her tiny apartment.
Mira had always been a creature of habit. Her days revolved around work at the bookstore, solitary lunches, evening walks, and reading before bed. Her phone was mostly silent—occasional promotional texts, reminders from her bank, or the rare message from her cousin checking in. So, when her phone buzzed at 7:42 p.m., she didn’t rush to check it.

But something about the timing felt strange. Almost like a whisper in the dark.
She glanced at the screen.
Unknown Number: "Hello Mira. I know this is sudden. But I think I'm your brother."
She blinked.
The coffee slipped from her hands and splashed across the floor, soaking into the old rug before she even noticed.
My brother?
Impossible.
Mira had grown up an only child, raised by her mother in a small, single-bedroom flat. Her father had left when she was a baby—at least, that’s what she’d been told. Her mother had always been vague about the details, only saying he wasn’t a part of their lives and never would be.

She stared at the message again.

"I’m sorry to drop this on you. My name is Aarav. I’ve been looking for you for a long time. Can we talk?"

Her heart pounded in her chest, louder than the rain outside.

She didn’t respond. Instead, she scrolled up, hoping for some context. But there was nothing—just this sudden intrusion into her carefully ordered world.

For hours, she sat frozen, mind spinning. Who was this man? What did he mean by brother?

That night, Mira didn’t sleep.

By morning, curiosity had clawed its way past fear. She messaged back.

"How do you know me?"

The reply came minutes later.

"Our father—your father too—passed away last year. He left a box of letters. One of them had your name. A picture of you as a child. I’ve been trying to find you ever since."

Her throat tightened.

She had no memories of her father. Her mother had removed every trace of him from their lives. No photos. No stories. Just silence.

Aarav sent more.

A scanned copy of a letter—written in messy, slanted handwriting. Her name was there. Mention of "the daughter I lost touch with" and "my deepest regret."

Then came the photo. A baby girl—Mira, unmistakably—with a man holding her, eyes tired but proud.

She stared at it for a long time.

Something broke open inside her.

They agreed to meet the next week. A small café halfway between their cities.

Mira sat by the window, fingers tapping nervously on the table. When Aarav walked in, she recognized him instantly. Same dark eyes. Same unsure smile.

They talked for hours.

About childhoods that had run parallel, yet never touched. About the man who had been a father to one and a stranger to the other. Aarav spoke of a quiet man who had seemed perpetually weighed down by regret. He told her how their father had confessed everything in the last few months of his life—that he had left Mira’s mother after a bitter fight, then stayed away because he thought he wasn’t welcome anymore.

"He said he didn’t deserve to come back," Aarav said softly.

Mira couldn’t speak. All her life, she had believed he had chosen to disappear. And now, a message had opened the door to a past she never knew existed.

Over the following weeks, Mira and Aarav grew closer.

They shared stories, photos, family traditions. She met his wife and their newborn daughter. Slowly, she let herself feel something she had buried long ago—belonging.

The emptiness that had followed her like a shadow for years began to fade.

One evening, as they stood on the beach watching the sun sink into the waves, Aarav handed her a small wooden box.

"It was meant for you."

Inside were more letters. A necklace. A little drawing she had made as a child—crayon scribbles signed Mira, age 5. And a final note.

"If you’re reading this, it means you’ve found her. Tell her I never stopped thinking of her. Not for one day."

Tears streamed down Mira’s cheeks. For the first time in her life, she felt seen by the man she had never known.

Months passed. Seasons changed. Mira’s world slowly reshaped itself. The bookstore remained, the rain still fell, but now there were dinners with Aarav, birthday parties with his daughter, phone calls just to say hello.

And all of it had started with that one, unexpected message.

A year later, Mira visited her mother’s grave.

She placed a single white lily down and whispered, “I wish you’d told me. But I think I understand why you didn’t. I found him, Mom. I found family.”

She didn’t need to say more.

As she walked away, the sky above cleared. The first sunbeam broke through the clouds, falling softly on her shoulders.

The message that had arrived out of nowhere—one line from a stranger—had unraveled secrets, rewritten history, and rebuilt her future.

Sometimes, everything changes not with a grand event, but with a single message at 7:42 p.m. on an ordinary Tuesday.

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