image


image

Akshar: The Living World

KAJAL VERMA
FANTASY
Report this story
Found something off? Report this story for review.

Submitted to Contest #4 in response to the prompt: 'An unexpected message changes everything. What will you do next?'

Varanasi was not a city. It was a hymn etched into stone, a heartbeat of fire and ash, the place where endings bowed to beginnings. And tonight, it waited.
Yug stood at the edge of the Ganga, watching the river devour the light.
Around him, priests raised copper bowls of flame, reciting mantras older than time. Pilgrims chanted. Temple bells echoed. The Maha Aarti flared high, honoring the gods and the cycle of life.
Yug felt none of it.
No joy. No reverence. Not even fear.
He rolled up his sleeve. His wrist, as always, was blank.
In a world where every soul was born with a divine message—a Janma-Lekha, a phrase written in glowing Sanskrit on the skin—he had nothing. No script. No destiny.
Just absence.
The monks who raised him in Kashi called it a “divine delay.”
The Jyotiks—priests of order and fate—called it a threat.
And Yug?
He called it a curse.
As the final bell rang, something shifted.
Not in the air.
Inside him.
A pulse—deep, electric, alive.
He gasped. His knees buckled. A searing burn exploded in his chest and climbed his spine. His vision blurred.
Then it began.
A character flared into light on his collarbone: अ — the primal syllable, the beginning of all sound.
Pain followed beauty. Each glyph carved itself into his skin like fire dipped in music. They spiraled across his chest, ribs, and back, forming a living mantra:
“Antim jyoti tumse mṛityu tak.”
(“The last light will die with you.”)
The moment the final syllable etched itself, the sky stopped breathing.
Across the city, temple lamps flickered.
The flame in priests' bowls extinguished mid-chant.
Birds turned in the air.
Even the river paused.
Far above, in the Jyotik Tower, crimson alarms screamed.
A priest in gold-threaded robes stared at the screen.
“Unauthorized imprint,” intoned a mechanical voice.
“The message is alive.”
“Probability of disruption: 97%.”
“Initiate Agni Protocol.”
Back by the Ganga, Yug clutched his chest, gasping.
The glyphs burned like stars. The air trembled around him. People began to scream—not at him, but at the temples failing, the digital sun-discs dimming, and the holy servers crashing into silence.
Yug ran.
He dashed through ancient alleys, past stone lions and shuttered stalls, away from the screams and failing light. His breath rasped. His skin still glowed.
I didn’t ask for this, he thought.
I didn’t want this.
He ducked into the shadow of a crumbling Sanskrit library.
But someone was already there.
She stood like a relic, wrapped in a dusky green sari, her eyes lit with old fire.
“I saw the light,” she said calmly. “It’s begun.”
He backed away. “What is this? What’s happening to me?”
She stepped forward, her voice low, reverent.
“My name is Mira. I was once Jyotik. I deciphered karmic scripts, until I saw too much.”
She pointed to the glowing mantra across his chest.
“That… is not a Janma-Lekha. It is Yug—the living word. That which cannot be destroyed.”
He stared at her, heart pounding.
“I was born without a message. Why now?”
She smiled sadly.
“Because you are not the one receiving the message. You are the message.”
The sky cracked. A lightning bolt—no storm in sight—hit the Jyotik Tower across the river. Smoke bloomed. Screams rose.
“The network is collapsing,” Mira said. “Fate is fraying. Everyone’s messages are failing. People’s destiny scripts are vanishing. You didn’t just appear, Yug. You rewrote the pattern.”
He stepped back. “That’s impossible.”
“Not if your soul is older than the system,” she replied. “There are stories in forgotten Upanishads. Of a being born once every age, bearing the Yug—the sacred syllables that change reality. You are that echo.”
In a golden hall beneath the Jyotik Tower, the council prepared their final decree.
“The Yug has returned,” said Mahapatra Udayan, voice trembling. “This boy is a blasphemy. A glitch left over from before the order.”
A machine-priest nodded.
“Initiate full cleansing. If the message spreads, karma itself will collapse.”
And so they summoned the Rakshic Construct—a digitized demon pulled from corrupted Vedic lore. A weapon made from Ravana’s fragmented code.
“Find the boy,” it snarled in a voice that glitched between data and desire.
“Silence the syllables.”
Yug and Mira fled deeper into the ruins.
As they ran through forgotten archives, dusty walls lit up—responding to the glow of his skin. Sealed doors opened. Ghosts whispered in Sanskrit. One hallway even bent around him, forming a path that hadn’t existed before.
“You are changing the rules,” Mira whispered.
“I don’t know how.”
“You don’t need to. The Yug is choice. That’s what the system fears.”
They stopped in a sanctum—a shrine carved from obsidian and etched with sound. At its center: a suspended slab of crystal, humming.
“This is the last Shabd-Stambh,” Mira said. “The Pillar of Sound. A place once used to record divine truths.”
Yug stepped closer. The glyphs on his body began to pulse with it—resonating.
“The choice is here,” she said. “You can speak the word aloud, release the Yug fully, and awaken the old truth—destroying the fate system.”
He hesitated.
“And if I don’t?”
“You can bury it,” she said quietly. “Let it die with you. The world will continue under order. Controlled. Predictable. Safe.”
Suddenly, a roar.
The Rakshic Construct crashed through the sanctum wall—ten feet of obsidian claws and woven scripture, its body crawling with corrupted mantras.
“You are noise,” it growled, “in a song meant to end.”
It lunged at Yug, who raised his arm instinctively—and the glyphs flared white-hot.
The demon shrieked as its corrupted body twisted, unable to read his message. It faltered—but not for long.
“You must choose,” Mira shouted. “Now!”

Yug looked at the pillar. At Mira. At the Construct.
At his body—once blank, now a storm of meaning.
He stepped forward, placed his hand on the Shabd-Stambh—and whispered the final line of the mantra glowing across his skin:
“I am not your prophecy. I am your question.”
The sanctum erupted.
Light surged from the pillar in concentric ripples. The Rakshic Construct disintegrated mid-scream. Across the city, people gasped as their Janma-Lekhas vanished—some in fear, others in awe.
Every fate… deleted.
Every choice… returned.
The next morning, silence blanketed Varanasi.
Pilgrims stood by the river, staring at their empty wrists. Jyotiks wandered the temples, stunned. No scripts. No algorithms. No divine orders.
Just people. And choice.
Some wept. Some laughed.
Some knelt and prayed—not for instruction, but for understanding.

Yug stood alone by the Ganga once more. The glyphs on his skin had dimmed, no longer glowing, but not gone.
Mira appeared beside him.
“The word lives,” she said.
He looked at his hands. “What now?”
She smiled. “Now, we write our own story, without any scripts. ”
He turned toward the river, where lotus blossoms floated freely, no longer placed, no longer scripted.
He smiled, softly.
“The last light will die with you.”
And then… he stepped forward into the water...to let his body relax and feel the holy Ganga.


Share this story
image 400
Points Earned
image #72
Current Rank
imageimageimageimageimage
8 Readers have supported this story
Help This Story win

Tap below to show your support

10
Points
20
Points
30
Points
40
Points
50
Points
LET'S TALK image
User profile
Author of the Story
Thank you for reading my story! I'd love to hear your thoughts
User profile
(Minimum 30 characters)

wonderfull kaha se ye sab le ke ate ho \n

0 reactions
React React
👍 ❤️ 👏 💡 🎉

Hey Kajal, your story is breathtaking—Varanasi came alive, and Yug\'s journey gave me chills. The blend of mythology and rebellion was stunning. I gave it a full 50 points. If you find a moment, do check out my story, The Room Without Windows: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/5371/the-room-without-windows

0 reactions
React React
👍 ❤️ 👏 💡 🎉

Epic????✨

0 reactions
React React
👍 ❤️ 👏 💡 🎉

Wow

0 reactions
React React
👍 ❤️ 👏 💡 🎉

Very nice

0 reactions
React React
👍 ❤️ 👏 💡 🎉