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The Clockmaker's Will

Pathik Bothra
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'

Julian Fernwright hadn’t spoken his grandfather’s name aloud in over a decade, yet here it was again—inked neatly on cream-coloured parchment, sealed with wax, and delivered to his cramped apartment like a ghost from another time. Elias Fernwright, Master Horologist, Deceased. The letter smelt faintly of oil and cedar, as if it had been plucked from the walls of the old workshop itself. Along with it came a brass key, a train ticket to Greystone Hollow, and a note scrawled in Elias’s unmistakable hand: “Fix the clock, and you’ll know everything.”

His parents had died young, leaving Julian to be raised by his grandfather in the quiet, fog-wreathed town of Greystone Hollow. But ten years ago, in a burst of youthful defiance and aching ambition, he had left both Elias Fernwright and the slow-churning rhythm of town life behind. London had promised success, excitement, and a future unbound by ticking clocks and musty wooden shelves.

But instead, it offered long hours in cramped repair booths, a dwindling bank account, and the quiet gnaw of regret. So when news came of Elias's passing, Julian felt a hollow ache—grief, yes, but also a strange sense of reprieve. The old man was gone... but he had left behind a legacy. A shop. A workshop. A place that still bore the Fernwright name like a timeworn badge of honour.

With little left to hold him in London, Julian packed his tools and boarded the train back to Greystone Hollow. He told himself it was for a fresh start—maybe even a second chance. But deep down, something else stirred. A curiosity. A whisper in the back of his mind. The clock, the letter, and his grandfather’s cryptic message—they felt less like an inheritance and more like an invitation. What he didn’t yet know was that nestled within the walls of that quiet workshop weren’t just gears and springs but secrets—long buried, restless, and eager to surface.

After a few hours of quiet travel through the countryside, Julian arrived at his hometown—Greystone Hollow. The air felt different here—cooler, purer, tinged with pine and something faintly metallic, like old tools left out in the rain. Just breathing it in seemed to wash away some of the grit London had left on his lungs. As the train pulled away behind him, he stood still for a moment, letting the silence settle. Then, with his bag slung over his shoulder, he made his way to the graveyard.

The path was lined with mossy stones and overgrown ivy, familiar yet distant, like a memory softened by time. He found his grandfather’s grave beneath an old yew tree, the headstone simple but well-carved. For a few minutes, he stood in quiet reflection, placing a small bundle of wildflowers on the soil and offering a whispered prayer. No grand farewell—just respect and a touch of guilt for having stayed away so long.

From there, he walked to the old shop. Using the brass key, he turned the lock and pushed open the door. A dry creak echoed as it swung inward, revealing a room thick with dust and stillness. Cobwebs clung to the shelves, and the scent of aged wood and machine oil lingered in the air like incense. It was clear the shop hadn’t been opened in weeks—perhaps not since Elias had died.

Julian rolled up his sleeves and began to clean, sweeping out the dust, righting toppled stools, and wiping grime from the workbenches. As he cleared off the large oak desk by the window, something caught his eye—a broken wall clock, its face cracked, its hands frozen at midnight. He stared at it, heart thudding. This must be it—the one his grandfather had written about. The clock that was meant to reveal everything. He didn’t touch it just yet. First, he needed to finish cleaning. Then, he’d see what secrets it might hold.

After tidying the workshop and restoring some order to the old space, Julian returned to the oak desk by the window where the broken clock lay in quiet defiance. He studied it carefully. The front glass was shattered, a fine web of cracks still clinging to the brass rim. Its pendulum weight was missing entirely, and the inner mechanism felt jammed, frozen in time. Most striking of all was the hour hand—stuck firmly at midnight, as though the clock refused to move past some long-forgotten moment.

He decided to begin with the most obvious fault: the jammed hour hand. With a small screwdriver and delicate precision, he opened the back casing and peered into the heart of the clock. The gears were caked in dust, some slightly misaligned, others stiff with age. Working slowly, he cleaned the teeth of the wheels and oiled the central pivot. Then, with a faint click, the mechanism loosened.

Julian carefully resealed the back and turned the clock upright. For a moment, nothing happened. Then, with a soft whirring sound, the hands began to turn. First the minute hand twitched, then the hour hand crept forward—breaking free from midnight for the first time in years. As it did, a faint metallic click echoed within the wooden casing. Julian froze. Beneath the clock’s base, a narrow panel slid open, revealing a hidden compartment carved into the bottom. Inside, tucked within a velvet-lined recess, lay an old black-and-white photograph, a tarnished brass key, and a folded piece of paper—yellowed with age.

Beneath the flickering lamplight, Julian carefully unfolded the aged slip of paper. The ink had faded slightly, but the handwriting remained elegant and unmistakable—his grandfather’s. It read: “For what I should have unlocked long ago.” A sentence that felt less like a message and more like a confession.

He turned his gaze to the photograph. The woman stared out from the sepia tones with eyes that seemed to know too much. She had strong features softened by time—a narrow jaw, wavy dark hair pinned neatly back, and a steady, unsmiling gaze that carried weight. She couldn’t have been much older than thirty when it was taken. Pinned just beneath the frame, etched in Elias’s tidy script, was a name: Margaret Blackthorne.

Julian frowned, his mind grasping at half-memories and names half-heard in childhood. The name stirred something faintly familiar, but no story came to mind. A neighbour? A lost friend? His curiosity bloomed into a quiet urgency. What had Elias meant to unlock? And what did this woman have to do with a clock sealed shut for years?

The key itself was small, brass, and cool to the touch—its teeth finely cut, the head shaped like a rose in bloom. He spent the better part of the next hour testing it on every lock in the workshop. Drawers, cabinets, even the cellar door behind the coat rack. But nothing yielded. Each turn ended in resistance, each clickless moment only deepening the mystery.

Eventually, Julian tucked the key safely into his coat pocket and sat back down at the desk. He looked again at the clock. One secret had already revealed itself. Perhaps, if he kept going, the rest would follow.

Julian turned his attention back to the clock. With delicate hands, he carefully removed the shattered glass pane, brushing away the fine shards that clung stubbornly to the rim. He retrieved a new pane from Elias’s supply cupboard—a dusty stack of spares still wrapped in yellowing newspaper—and measured it against the frame. It fit perfectly. Once fixed into place, he began polishing the surface with a soft cloth, restoring its clarity.

As he worked, something caught his eye—faint etchings circling the inner rim, previously hidden by grime and distortion. He leaned in, adjusting the angle to catch the light. The inscription was barely visible, almost like a ghost of handwriting carved into brass: 3 April 1993. The date stopped him cold.

That was the very year he had left Greystone Hollow. The year he had walked away from Elias... and, unknowingly, perhaps, from whatever had begun brewing beneath the village’s quiet surface.

Fuelled by a sudden urgency, Julian grabbed his coat and made his way through the mist-veiled streets to the town library. It hadn’t changed—still the same creaking wooden steps and lingering scent of old paper and damp stone. He made his way to the back, where the dusty archives lay largely undisturbed, and began rifling through the bound newspapers from 1993.

After nearly an hour of searching, he found it—a small, easily overlooked paragraph buried in the corner of a faded page.
“Local woman Margaret Blackthorne reported missing. Last seen near the northern trail. Authorities cite no foul play. Investigation ongoing.”

And that was all. No follow-up. No photographs. No resolution.

Julian stared at the line for a long time. A woman vanishes, and the town barely blinked. It was as though Margaret had been quietly erased. But Elias hadn’t forgotten her. And now, neither would he.

Leaving the library with the newspaper clipping folded neatly in his coat pocket, Julian crossed the street to a small corner shop that looked like it had barely changed in fifty years. Inside, the scent of tobacco and wood polish lingered in the air. The shopkeeper—a grey-haired man with thick spectacles—was speaking quietly to another villager near the counter.

Julian approached, holding the folded article in one hand. “Excuse me,” he said gently. “Do either of you remember anything about the disappearance of Margaret Blackthorne?”

At the mention of the name, both men went abruptly silent. The conversation halted mid-sentence. Their eyes met for a fleeting moment, as if deciding silently what not to say. A heavy pause filled the air.

Then, with forced cheer, the shopkeeper shifted tone and said, “You’re Elias Fernwright’s grandson, aren’t you? The watchmaker?” He offered a solemn nod. “Sorry for your loss. He was a fine man.”

Julian recognised the dodge instantly. The shift in subject wasn’t casual—it was deliberate. A wall had gone up the moment he said Margaret’s name. He nodded politely, thanked them, and stepped back out into the cold evening air.

There was something wrong here—something hidden beneath layers of silence and time. He could feel it in the way they avoided eye contact, the way the conversation shut like a book with a broken spine.

By the time he returned to the workshop, dusk had fallen, and Greystone Hollow had curled into its usual hush. Most windows were dark, and the streets were quiet, save for the occasional hoot of an owl in the distance. But Julian knew he wouldn't be able to sleep—not until he uncovered more. He lit a lantern, pulled his chair to the desk, and turned once more to the clock.

This time, he focused on the chime mechanism, which hadn’t worked in years. He opened the rear panel and examined the hammers, rods, and winding cylinder. Several components were out of alignment, and the chime lever had rusted stiff. After nearly half an hour of careful cleaning and reassembly, he wound the clock and let the mechanism turn.

To his astonishment, instead of a bell or melody, a voice crackled through a concealed speaker—worn, faint, but unmistakably Elias’s.

“If you’re hearing this”, the voice said, crackling softly through the speaker, “then you’ve repaired the chime. I suppose that means you’re ready... or at least determined.” There was a pause, then a weary sigh. “Her name was Margaret Blackthorne. And I loved her more than time itself. But not all love stories are meant to be completed. Some are torn apart before the final page.”

Another moment of silence followed before the voice returned, quieter now, edged with pain. “I tried to uncover what happened to her. I tried to speak. But I was warned... silenced by those who hold sway in this town—those who feared what the truth might unravel. So I built this clock instead. Not as a monument, but as a key—to unlock what I couldn’t say aloud.”

Julian sat frozen, his heart pounding. The words carried the weight of sorrow long buried. His grandfather had loved this woman. And whatever had happened to her had haunted him all his life.

The clock wasn’t just a mystery—it was a message. A legacy. A cry for truth from a man who had waited too long to speak.

Then he again came back to the clock. Now, only one thing was left to fix: the pendulum. Julian went to the supply cupboard and started looking for a pendulum weight. He found that one pendulum weight was kept aside from everything else wrapped in red paper. He took that, thinking that Elias might have kept it for the task.
Then he repaired the clock using it.

After that, the clock was completed, so he attached the clock to the nail fixed on the sidewall. But then he noticed that, above the nail, the wall seemed unusual. So he touched it and saw that it was a false wall. Instead of cement, it was made of cloth in a small portion. So he tore that cloth and saw that a locked box was there. He took it and placed it on the table. Then he used the brass key to unlock it and saw that a letter and a few documents were present inside.

Julian unfolded the letter with care. The parchment was fragile, the ink faded but still legible, written in a hurried, slanted hand—Margaret’s. His heart pounded as he began to read.

“Dearest Elias”, it began. “If you are reading this, then I pray you have not forgotten me, nor the truth we once shared. I write to you now in fear. Three men—Mayor Hargrove, Judge Linnett, and Reverend Coste—have taken my land. They say it belongs to the town now, that I have no claim. But I do. I’ve enclosed every document to prove it. Please keep them safe.”

Julian’s eyes moved to the bundle of papers next to the letter. Bound together by twine, they bore signatures, seals, and clear proof of ownership—records that showed the land had legally belonged to Margaret. It was all here: property deeds, tax receipts, maps drawn by the surveyor’s hand. Undeniable.

He returned to the letter.

“I fear they will come tonight. I’ve heard whispers—they intend to silence me. I have nowhere to turn but to you. Please, Elias. Meet me by the old schoolhouse before midnight. I will wait for you in the clearing near the bell tower. Help me escape this place. Help me start anew.”

The letter ended without farewell. Just a name—Margaret—and a smudge of ink that may once have been a tear.

Julian stared at the paper, stunned by the weight of her words. She had trusted Elias. Risked everything to ask for his help. And yet...

His eyes fell on a smaller piece of parchment tucked beneath the documents. It was newer, written in Elias’s hand.

“I was afraid”, it read. “Afraid of them. Of what they might do to me, to the shop, and to the legacy I’d built. So I didn’t go. I stayed home. I left her there... waiting. I lost her because I chose silence.”

Julian sat back in his chair, the clock ticking softly above him. The truth was no longer buried. His grandfather hadn’t just left behind a mystery—he had left behind a confession.

Julian sat in silence, the letter trembling slightly in his hands. The ticking of the clock seemed louder now, echoing off the walls like a heartbeat that refused to be ignored. His chest felt tight—not just with grief but with the weight of everything left unsaid. Elias had been more than a master horologist; he had been a man haunted by fear, paralysed by the power others held over him. And in that paralysis, he had lost the woman he loved.

Julian ran a hand through his hair and stared at the papers once more—the proof, the plea, the confession. The truth had waited long enough.

By morning, he was ready.

He took the documents, the letter, and Elias’s final note. He made copies at the town’s record office, scanned them to digital form, and sent them—without hesitation—to every publication he could find. He mailed one to the historical society in Devon, another to the legal board in Norwich, and one directly to the current mayor’s office with a brief note: “It’s time the Hollow remembered.”

He knew there would be consequences. Whispers. Maybe even threats. But he also knew this was no longer about him—or even about Elias. It was about Margaret. About restoring what had been stolen and silenced.

That evening, as the sun dipped behind the hills, Julian stood in the doorway of the workshop, the clock ticking steadily behind him, no longer broken, no longer stuck at midnight.

The village would stir soon. The truth would rise.

And for the first time in years, time was on the side of the honest.

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Hi! I haven\'t written any story in this contest, so no need to \'reciprocate\'. Your story is nice, but I find some things a bit illogical: \nOn a clock face, 12 noon and 12 midnight are the same. How would Julian know the hands were stuck at midnight and not noon?\nSecondly, somewhere in the middle, you used the word \"so\" three times in three consecutive sentences: \'...so he attached the clock...\', \'...so he touched it...\', \'so he tore that cloth\'. The language and style in this para is quite different and inconsistent compared to your overall style of writing the story--casts doubts on the use of outside help... maybe I\'m simply being cynical. But having taught creative writing for almost 30 years, these things are instinctively visible to me. No offense intended, and I hope I am totally wrong.\nCheers.\nP.S.: But I have written three short stories in the contest held 2 months ago.\nThe titles are: \"A Stranger Walks Into a Tavern\", \"Tattoos Reveal The Soul\", and \"Wrong Time, Wrong Place. Again.\"\nDo read and let me know what you think of them, if you have the time and the mood. No need to give any points because this particular contest is closed and the winners have been announced.

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Wonderful. Truly wonderful. Wow, that sounds sarcastic. Its not. And I absolutely LOVED the writing style. If you or anybody who sees this has got a moment, could you check out my story too? Its got chaos, competition, and a girl who\'s way to smart to be stupid enough to invite every single rival thief to steal the most valuable diamond in the world :) :) :). Here\'s the link: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6175/the-group-chat-of-doom-a-vayne-mistake

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Pathik, your story is a mesmerizing and intricately woven mystery that grips from the first sentence! — I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, I’d be grateful if you could read my story, “Overheard at the Edge of Goodbye” and I’d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6116/overheard-at-the-edge-of-goodbye

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