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Stranger on the Train

Sunia Basu
ROMANCE
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'A simple “yes” leads to something you never saw coming'

It started with a seat.
The 7:42 express to Union Station was packed, every bench filled with commuters clutching coffee cups and scrolling through their phones with bleary eyes. I was halfway through rereading The Bell Jar when a voice interrupted my
bubble.
“Mind if I sit?”
I looked up, distracted. He was tall, dark-haired, wearing a worn leather jacket and a crooked smile. There was a calm confidence about him—like he already knew I’d say yes.
“Yes,” I said, not really thinking.
He chuckled. “Thanks.”
He slid into the seat beside me, brushing the edge of my coat. For a moment, I expected the usual silence that follows a stranger’s intrusion. But he glanced at the book in my lap.
“Good choice,” he said. “Depressing, but honest.”
That sparked something. We started talking. About books first—he liked Plath but preferred Didion. Then music—he was into jazz and old-school blues. We drifted from there into travel, and he told me about a little café in Lisbon that made
the best espresso he’d ever had. I told him I’d always wanted to see Iceland.
The forty-minute ride felt like five. As the train slowed, I realized I didn’t even know his name.
“I’m Sam,” he said, as if reading my mind.
“Clara.”
We exchanged numbers. He smiled that lopsided smile again and disappeared into the crowd.

Our first date was three days later. Drinks at a tucked-away speakeasy in the Lower East Side. He wore that same leather jacket and told me stories with just enough detail to feel real, but always a little vague. He was between jobs, he said. Something in design. He had a past, he admitted, but who didn’t?
I didn’t care. He was funny, attentive, and made me feel like the only person in the room.
One date turned into five. Then eight. We kissed in the rain after a late movie. He brought me breakfast the morning after
I had a fever. We spent hours talking about nothing and everything.
The mystery made it exciting.
Then one night, after too much wine and the quiet intimacy of shared silence, I stayed over at his place.
It was a small loft in Midtown—sparse, but cozy. Exposed brick, plants in mismatched pots, a guitar leaning against the
wall. I fell asleep tangled in his arms, warm and content.

When I woke up, the bed was cold.
I sat up slowly. Sunlight streamed in through the half-closed blinds. His side of the bed was empty.
“Sam?” I called.
No answer.
I got up, wrapped in a blanket, and wandered into the living room.
No sign of him.
No note. No text. Nothing.
I reached for my phone on the nightstand.
Gone.
My bag, too. My wallet. My ID.
My stomach flipped. I tore through the apartment, heart pounding. Everything else was still there—furniture, books,
the guitar. But not a trace of me.
I tried the front door. It was unlocked.
I ran down the hall to the building’s lobby, barefoot, heart racing. The doorman looked up, startled.
“Morning,” he said.
“Do you know the guy who lives in 4B?”
He blinked. “That unit’s a short-term rental. The owners are in Europe. No one’s supposed to be there right now.”
I stared at him, the room tilting sideways.
“I—I woke up there. He said he lived there. His name’s Sam. Dark hair, leather jacket—”
The doorman shook his head slowly. “I haven’t seen anyone like that.”

The police were called.
The apartment’s actual owners—an older couple named the Whitmores—had just returned from a two-week river cruise
in France. They found me standing in their living room, pale and shaking, wrapped in a stranger’s blanket.
The cops weren’t sure what to make of me. I showed them the texts, but by then, his number was disconnected. The phone I had used was gone, wiped clean. The photos I’d taken of him were missing—deleted from my cloud storage somehow. There was no trace of him online. No record of the number. No Sam. No last name. Not even surveillance footage in the building.
It was as if he had never existed.
They asked me if I’d imagined it.
I didn’t blame them. It sounded insane.
But I knew the feel of his hand in mine. I remembered the way he smiled when he talked about Miles Davis. I remembered how he tucked my hair behind my ear the first time he kissed me.
He was real.

I moved back in with my sister for a while after that. Couldn’t sleep through the night. Kept checking the locks. Jumped whenever a stranger brushed past me.
For months, I couldn’t ride the train.
Not because I was afraid of what would happen.
But because part of me still hoped I’d see him again.
Ridiculous, I know.


Now, a year later, I still don’t know his real name. I’ve searched forums, hired a PI, even posted about it online. Nothing.
He was a ghost—one who knew how to vanish without a trace. Maybe he’d done it before.
Maybe he’s doing it now, to someone else.
And me?
I double-lock my doors. I don’t talk to strangers.
Especially not on trains.
Because I know better now.
One word—just one—can change everything.
All because I said “yes” to a stranger on a train.
Now, every time I hear the rumble of a train, my heart skips. I still don’t know who he was—or why he chose me. But one thing is certain: some strangers aren’t meant to be met.
And some “yes” answers change your life forever.

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Sunia, your story is a captivating and bittersweet romance that turns a simple “yes” into a thrilling rollercoaster of emotions! — I gave it a full 50 points. If you get a moment, I’d be grateful if you could read my story, “Overheard at the Edge of Goodbye” and I’d love to hear what you think: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6116/overheard-at-the-edge-of-goodbye

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Added 50 Points... Happy to be the first one to vote as I like your story :-)

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Good One. I liked it.

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