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The Whisper Behind the Wall

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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'

Old Delhi – 10:36 PM

The building was silent, except for the creaks of age and the occasional scurry of rats in the ceiling. Ravi Mehta glanced around the nearly empty office floor, the Ministry of Urban Affairs bathed in flickering yellow tube light. He hated working late. The corridors of this British-era structure held too many echoes.

But tonight, Mr. Kapoor had insisted: “File that report before midnight. Minister Malhotra wants it on his desk tomorrow morning.”

He clicked “save” and stretched, the old office chair groaning beneath him. The file on the Delhi Slum Redevelopment Project was done. Hundreds of families were to be relocated, but something in the proposal didn’t sit right with him—missing data, inflated land values, and rerouted ownership trails.

The light above him sputtered. A faint buzz. Then darkness.

Ravi cursed softly and reached into his drawer for the emergency torch. As he turned it on, the beam sliced through the gloom, catching the reflection of the glass-walled cabin of Mr. Kapoor.

He was supposed to have left hours ago.

But light seeped from under the door.

And voices.

Ravi froze. Two people. Low. Urgent. He moved closer, switching off the torch and pressing himself against the wall.

“…The court order will cover the demolition. Once the basti is cleared, the land’s ours.”

“And the journalist? She’s been sniffing again.”

“Take care of her. Like the professor. Discredit, or worse—whatever it takes.”

Ravi’s blood ran cold.

He knew that voice.

Minister Rajiv Malhotra—India’s Urban Development head and a rising star in the Cabinet.

The second voice was Mr. Kapoor.

They were orchestrating a cover-up… and eliminating anyone in the way.

His breath hitched.

Step away quietly, Ravi.

But his elbow knocked over a stack of files on a nearby table.

Clatter.

The voices stopped.

“Who’s there?” Kapoor’s voice, loud now. Threatening.

Ravi bolted.

Daryaganj – 11:28 PM

Ravi slammed his door shut, double-locked it, and drew the curtains. His one-room flat had never felt smaller. Heart hammering, he turned on his laptop. With trembling fingers, he inserted a USB stick and launched a voice recorder.

He recounted everything—exact words, time, voices. Then he encrypted the file, labeled it SlumRedeem_RM75.mp4, and uploaded it to three cloud drives.

He scheduled delayed emails to himself.

If he didn’t access the drives in 48 hours, the links would go out to every journalist he knew—and some he didn’t.

He didn’t sleep that night.

Next Morning – Ministry Building

When Ravi entered, the air felt wrong.

Too quiet. Too watchful.

Mr. Kapoor stood near the entrance, smiling.

“Ah, Ravi. Minister Malhotra would like to see you.”

He forced a polite smile. “Now?”

“Come,” Kapoor insisted, his hand firm on Ravi’s back.

They went up to the top floor, where only senior officials were allowed. As the heavy doors of the Minister’s chamber closed behind him, Ravi’s palms dampened.

Malhotra stood by the window, his voice calm. “You were working late last night, I hear.”

Ravi nodded.

“Did you… overhear anything?”

Ravi kept his gaze low. “No, sir. Just the rats.”

A beat. Then Malhotra chuckled.

“Good. Delhi’s full of rats, isn’t it?”

Ravi tried to laugh.

Malhotra leaned closer. “You’ve been working hard. Why don’t you take a few days off? Fresh air, maybe the hills?”

Ravi’s smile didn’t reach his eyes. “Thank you, sir. That sounds peaceful.”

When he stepped out of the office, he felt the invisible crosshairs tracking his back.

Saket – 3:45 PM

Ravi didn’t go home. He changed two autos and a bus to reach Saket. His cousin Ritu opened the door, startled by his appearance.

“What happened to you?”

He told her everything.

When he played back the voice recording, her expression hardened.

“That’s enough to bring them down,” she whispered. “But we can’t go to mainstream media. They’ll kill the story—or us.”

“Then what?”

“There’s someone you need to meet.”

The Meeting – 9:30 PM

Ritu led him to a dimly lit café in Majnu-ka-Tilla. Inside, they met Abhay, an ex-intelligence officer turned whistleblower.

Abhay listened, silent.

When the recording ended, he said, “Do you know how many people have died over this land? The professor. The journalist. An RTI activist in Dwarka—burned alive.”

Ravi swallowed hard.

Abhay continued, “Meera Joseph’s not dead. She faked her disappearance. She’s been working undercover. I can get you to her.”

He passed them a railway ticket.

“Go tonight. Kochi Express. You leave in two hours. After that, disappear.”

Train to Kochi – 11:30 PM

In the dim berth, Ravi couldn’t sleep. Every whistle, every passenger’s movement made him twitch.

Ritu leaned over. “We’re okay. Just a little longer.”

He nodded, eyes on the USB sewn inside her jacket’s lining.

Kochi – 2 Days Later

They met Meera at a small writer’s café in Fort Kochi.

She looked nothing like her photos—shorter hair, hardened eyes.

When they showed her the recording, she exhaled deeply.

“This is it. I’ve been waiting for this. I’ll need 48 hours to prepare the story. Can you stay hidden?”

They nodded.

48 Hours Later – The Internet Breaks

The video dropped at 9:00 AM sharp.

It was a masterclass—voice match overlays, timeline reconstructions, drone visuals of the demolished slums, footage of grieving families, quotes from the late professor, and photos of Meera herself, confirming her disappearance was a smokescreen.

The public erupted.

Within hours:

#SlumScam trended nationwide.

Journalists camped outside Parliament.

Minister Malhotra released a statement denying the allegations.

But the Central Forensic Voice Lab confirmed the voices.

By evening, Mr. Kapoor was detained at the airport.

The next morning, Minister Malhotra resigned.

But it wasn’t over.

Ravi’s Flat – One Week Later

He returned to Delhi under Z+ protection.

But there were messages slipped under his door.

No name.

Just:

“You’re not safe. They still want the original copy.”

“Delete your backups.”

“We’re watching.”

He forwarded them to Abhay.

But that night, someone tried to break in.

Ritu was the one who smelled smoke first. Someone had doused the front door in kerosene.

They escaped through the rear balcony before the fire took hold.

Final Blow

Meera arranged a live press conference in Delhi, flanked by human rights lawyers and the families of the displaced.

She named every corrupt officer involved. Named contractors. Named offshore accounts.

And then played one last recording Ravi hadn’t known about:

“We don’t need to win in court. We just need to make sure the witnesses don’t make it to trial.”

It was Malhotra. Again.

This time? He was arrested.

Live.

One Month Later

Ravi was offered a role in the newly formed Whistleblower Protection Bureau, a secretive wing under the Home Ministry.

Ritu was approached by Netflix and BBC for her story rights.

Meera launched a platform called Citizen Truth India.

And yet…

Some nights, Ravi still heard it.

That first whisper behind the wall.

Like a ghost.

Like a warning.

The system was wounded—but not dead.

And the whisper was still out there.

Waiting to be heard again.

THE END

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