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The Ceiling Whisper

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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'

It started with a plumbing issue.
Jamie lived in apartment 3B—a cozy, cramped one-bedroom in an aging building that carried more secrets than it did insulation. The ceiling had sprung a leak right above the kitchen sink. Not enough to flood, just enough to make a steady plink… plink… plink that drove her mad.
Her landlord, as always, was useless.
“Maintenance will check it out next week,” he’d said in a voicemail that sounded like he was on a beach.
So Jamie did what any desperate tenant would do—grabbed a step stool, a flashlight, and decided to investigate.
That’s when she heard it.
Not the leak. Not the pipes.
A voice.
Low. Urgent. Just above her head.
At first, she thought it was the usual neighborly noise. The couple in 4B argued constantly about everything from groceries to Game of Thrones finales.
But this voice was different.
She held her breath.
A man, whispering:
“No one can know. We clean it up. Tonight. Got it?”
Another voice—hushed, shaking. A woman:
“But what if someone saw?”
Jamie froze.
She wasn’t sure what exactly she was hearing, but it wasn’t about spilled soup or rent checks.
She pressed her ear closer to the ceiling.
“We dump it by the river. You burn the gloves. I’ll take care of the rest.”
The leak didn’t seem so bad anymore.

Jamie backed off the stool slowly. Her heart pounded. She turned off the flashlight, sat on the couch, and stared at the ceiling like it might grow eyes and stare back.
What was that?
A joke? Roleplay? A weird podcast?
She waited another ten minutes. Heard footsteps. Then the faint click of a door closing upstairs.
It was quiet after that.
Too quiet.

She barely slept that night. Every creak in the walls made her twitch. She kept her phone close, debating whether to call someone. But call who? And say what?
“Hi, 911? I think my upstairs neighbor might be hiding a body, but also maybe not?”
By morning, she’d almost convinced herself it was just a bad dream or maybe a scene from a TV show bleeding through the floorboards.
Then she saw the woman from 4B.
Out front. In the same clothes as yesterday. Pale. Wide-eyed. Hands trembling as she lit a cigarette.
Jamie walked past her slowly, pretending to check her mailbox.
That’s when the woman looked straight at her.
And said, “Did you hear anything last night?”
Jamie’s blood went cold.
“I… no. Why?”
The woman exhaled smoke like it was poison she’d been holding in.
“No reason,” she said.
Then she went back inside.

Jamie didn’t go to work that day. Instead, she Googled everything.
“Signs of crime in your apartment building.”
“Do people actually get away with murder?”
“Can you record your upstairs neighbors legally?”
She found little comfort in the answers.
Still, something in her clicked. She couldn’t ignore this. Whatever “this” was.
So she did something bold.
That night, she crept upstairs with a note and slid it under their door.
“I heard what you said. I’m not going to the police. But I want to talk. Tonight. Rooftop. Midnight.”
She didn’t sign it.
Didn’t sleep either.
At 11:58, she was already on the rooftop, bundled in a hoodie, adrenaline thrumming through her veins.
And at exactly midnight, the door creaked open.
It wasn’t the woman.
It was the man. Tall. Broad-shouldered. Dressed all in black like he’d stepped out of a spy thriller.
“I figured it was you,” he said.
Jamie didn’t move. “I didn’t mean to overhear. But I did. And if you’re doing something illegal—”
He laughed.
A short, bitter sound.
“You think we killed someone?”
She blinked. “Didn’t you?”
“No.” He stepped closer, face shadowed. “We were talking about my dog.”
Jamie stared at him.
“Your… dog?”
“She died,” he said. “Suddenly. My girlfriend didn’t want to report it because… well, because she panicked. We’d fed her something new, thought it might’ve been poisoned. There was a whole meltdown.”
“So… the ‘clean it up,’ the ‘burn the gloves’…”
“We buried her. In the woods. Stupid, I know. Illegal too. But we didn’t kill her. Just… grief. Messy, stupid grief.”
Jamie wanted to believe him.
But his eyes didn’t look like grief. They looked like cover-up.
And he was too calm.
“You sure that’s the truth?” she asked.
He didn’t blink. “Does it need to be?”
Then he turned and walked away.

She didn’t see the woman after that.
Not in the hallway, not at the mailbox, not anywhere.
When Jamie asked the landlord about her, he shrugged.
“They moved out. Didn’t even break the lease. Just left.”
She asked where.
He didn’t know.

Jamie still lives in 3B.
The ceiling leak eventually got fixed, but sometimes—especially late at night—she still hears things.
Whispers. Footsteps.
Sometimes, she even thinks she hears the woman crying.
She never reported what she heard.
But she wrote it all down. Every word. Every sound.
Just in case.
And one day, she might share it. With someone who listens.
Because sometimes the scariest thing in the world…
…isn’t what you hear.
It’s what you almost didn’t.

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WOW. Loved the ending. Great job on this, seriously. Btw, Im in the contest too. The Group Chat of Doom: A Vayne Mistake. Would be really grateful if you gave it a vote. It’s got a thief, a diamond, and a group chat that should absolutely be illegal. :D. Here\'s the link: I just entered a writing contest! Read, vote, and share your thoughts.! https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6175/the-group-chat-of-doom-a-vayne-mistake

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