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The Night the Moon Spoke to Me

Shabina Sheth
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'


By the time the moon arrived in the sky, curling like a soft smile in the dark, Mira had already decided that tonight, she would talk to it.

She was five and three-quarters, with knobby knees, pigtails that leaned in opposite directions, and a brain full of logic entirely her own. She believed fairies lived in shampoo bubbles, thought broccoli had feelings (which is why she always apologized before leaving them on her plate), and that grown-ups’ words had extra layers, like onions or onions in disguises.

That day had been especially onion-y.

She had tiptoed out for a post-bedtime juice box and had paused near the kitchen. She wasn’t supposed to hear grown-up talk. But ever since she’d started kindergarten, her ears had turned into curious radars. She’d learned that secrets were just stories that hadn’t been shared yet.

Behind the half-closed kitchen door, shadows moved. Mama’s voice quivered.

“We might lose the house, Jai.”

Mira froze.

Lose the house?

She clutched her juice box tighter. The straw squirted mango liquid onto her palm, sticky and cold. She crouched behind the dining table, invisible in her panda pajamas. Her breath caught like hiccups waiting to happen.

Lose the house? Like... misplace it? Drop it at the park? Forget it on the bus?

But then again, Baba lost his glasses *all the time*, and they were always on his head. Maybe houses were even trickier. Maybe if you weren’t careful, they wandered off.

Her belly did a funny dance — not like giggles, but like worry worms wiggling around. Her mind started jumping like popcorn.

Where would her bedtime books go? Would her window still open to the same peepal tree? Would her toys find her again?

That night, Mira sat on her window sill, forehead pressed to the cool glass, staring at the moon like it was a grandparent she hadn’t met yet. Soft and faraway, but listening.

The moon looked unusually large. Not scary-large, but curious-large, like it had leaned in for a closer listen.

“Moon,” she whispered, “please don’t let our house get lost. Mama will cry. Baba will go all quiet. And I don’t want to sleep in someone else’s smell.”

The moon blinked.

At least, Mira *thought* it blinked. Or maybe a cloud kissed it. Either way, it felt like an answer.


**The First Odd Thing**

The next morning, Mira’s crayon drawing — a scribbly rainbow house with windows like blinking eyes and a chimney shaped like a heart — was stuck to the fridge, like always.

Nothing unusual.

But when she tiptoed into the kitchen for her banana milk, the drawing… shifted.

Just a twitch.

The heart-shaped chimney pulsed like it had a heartbeat. A tiny one. A hopeful one.

Mira blinked. Rubbed her eyes. The house on the page smiled.

Really smiled.

She ran to her room. “It worked!” she declared to Professor Snuggles, her slightly-lopsided teddy bear with a plastic monocle drawn on with marker. “The moon said yes.”

Professor Snuggles blinked one brown eye knowingly. Mira had a hunch he’d been a wizard in a past life.


**The Second Odd Thing**

At lunch, Baba was staring at his daal like it had insulted him. Then, out of nowhere, he chuckled.

“You remember that orange scooter I rode in college?” he said to Mama, who was pulling at the threads of a fraying cushion.

Mama looked up, startled. “The one that broke down every Thursday?”

“Yes! I used to call it *Papita*.”

Mira giggled. “Papita means papaya!”

“I know. I was dramatic,” Baba grinned, looking younger than yesterday.

Mama shook her head, a small laugh slipping out. Something invisible seemed to unclench inside the room. Laughter that hadn’t lived there in months crept back in. The walls listened. Mira was sure of it.


**Moon Mail**

The moon became Mira’s secret mailbox. Every night, she wrote or whispered something into the dark. Wishes. Questions. Little worries folded like origami birds and sent skyward.

“Please make Mama smile more.”
“Can Baba stop smelling like tiredness?”
“Can the house stay, even if we don’t have all the money?”
“Can my dreams smell like mangoes again?”
“Why don’t grown-ups ask the moon for help?”

Sometimes, stars flickered in odd rhythms when she finished. Sometimes the wind kissed her forehead. Once, her curtains danced without breeze. Another night, she swore she heard a giggle — not hers, not anyone’s.


**The Third Odd Thing**

The toaster started burning only half the toast.

Not a big deal — unless you were five and looked closely.

The burnt side had... *patterns*.

Mira squinted. Swirly smudges. Shapes that shouldn’t be there.

One morning, the toast said: “DRAW MORE.”
The next: “PAINT YOUR HOUSE.”
And then: “LOVE HOLDS WALLS TOGETHER.”

Mira gasped. “The toaster is in on it!”

She ran to Mama. “Can we paint the house? With colours that hug?”

Mama blinked. “Uh… baby, we don’t really have money for that.”

“But what if it helps the house stay? What if houses get sad when no one dresses them?”

Mama looked at her strangely. And then, a week later, brought home two little cans of leftover paint from a clearance sale. One mint green. One sunflower yellow.

Together, they painted the front fence. Baba joined in, mumbling about how he once won a college art competition.

Laughter bubbled from places they didn’t know they had bubbles.


**Mira the Magnet**

The neighbours noticed.

Old Mr. Lobo brought over laddoos. “Your girl’s got spirit. Reminds me of when we used to hang lanterns in the monsoons.”

Aunty Reema offered unused curtains. “They match your fence. Brightens up the street, really.”

Even grumpy twins Sameer and Saleem from next door helped Mira paint tiny flowers on the gate.

At school, Mira drew more houses. All with moon-eyes and hugging walls. Her teacher hung them on the bulletin board. One drawing — a house holding hands with a girl — went viral on a local parents’ WhatsApp group.


**The Fourth Odd Thing**

One Sunday morning, a man with a shiny bald head and a camera slung across his chest knocked on their door.

“Are you the family with the hugging-fence house?” he asked.

Mama almost closed the door. But Mira peeked out and said, “Yes. And we also have a toaster that talks. Do you want toast?”

The man laughed. “I’m doing a story on community revival. This street’s become… magic.”

He took photos. Asked questions. Mira made him wait so she could draw a mural of the moon hugging a house on the garage door. The camera clicked again.

A week later, a letter arrived.

Their home had been chosen for a pilot program — one that restored old houses with community help and kept families in place. A local artist collective would sponsor repairs. They wouldn’t lose the house.

Mira didn’t understand all the big words. But she understood that Mama cried happy tears. And Baba spun her around in the garden until they both fell into the marigolds.


**The Fifth Odd Thing**

The house… *changed*.

Not just from the paint or the curtains.

Its windows seemed to blink slower in the afternoon sun. The doors sighed open instead of creaking. The floorboards hummed if you walked barefoot.

Sometimes, Mira thought she heard whispers from the walls — not scary ones, but old, sleepy ones. Like the house had started remembering who it was.

One afternoon, she saw a firefly in her cupboard. Just one. Glowing softly near her socks. She opened the window and let it out. It zig-zagged into the sunlight like it had somewhere important to be.


**The Last Night**

On the night they celebrated with laddoos and fairy lights, Mira climbed to the roof with Professor Snuggles.

Below, music trickled from someone’s Bluetooth speaker. The neighbours danced like shadows with party hats.

Above, the moon beamed.

Mira took a deep breath. The sky smelled like cardamom and cold stars.

“Thank you,” she whispered. “I think you saved us. Or maybe... I saved us? Or maybe we all saved each other a little bit.”

The moon didn’t blink this time.

It shimmered.

The sky held its breath.

And then, as Mira nestled against her bear and closed her eyes, something impossible happened.

A silver thread of moonlight curled down like a ribbon, touched the garage mural, and disappeared.

The mural sparkled faintly for a moment.

When she woke the next morning, the moon had left behind a single firefly, sitting on her windowsill.

It blinked once, twice, and flew away.

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The house stayed exactly where it belonged.
But something inside it — and inside everyone who lived there — had moved.
Not away.
Closer.
Like the moon leaning in to listen.

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Amazing story! I love how.....ugh, I don\'t know how to say this, like how well you captured the childhood experience. I don\'t even know how much sense that makes, like I said, I don\'t know how to express my thought. Anyway, overall. WONDERFUL story. Really amazing. And if you have a moment, could you check mine out too? Side effects may include rooting for actual criminals :D :D. https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6175/the-group-chat-of-doom-a-vayne-mistake

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Amazing story. Keep writing

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This is one of those quiet stories that sneaks up on you. At first, it feels like a sweet tale about a curious little girl — and then suddenly, you\'re feeling things you didn’t expect. It captures childhood wonder so well, but also touches on adult fears in such a gentle way. I loved how the magical moments weren’t flashy — just subtle, surreal touches that made you believe the moon really could be listening. It’s emotional, hopeful, and oddly healing. I didn’t know I needed this story until I read it.

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Okay, I might be a little biased — but honestly, this story is something else. I started reading it because my wife wrote it, but I kept reading because it genuinely pulled me in. The way she captured a child’s imagination, confusion, and quiet hope — it’s magic. And not the over-the-top, sparkly kind of magic. The real kind. The kind that sneaks into your chest when you least expect it.\n\nMira is such a beautifully written character. I could almost hear her whispering to the moon — and yes, I teared up a little at the end (no, I’m not embarrassed). This story reminded me how powerful gentle things can be. A child’s wish. A painted fence. A moon that maybe — just maybe — listens.\n\nIf this is the kind of story she tells in her spare time… I can’t wait to see what she writes next.

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