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The Light Beneath the Door

Rohit Sharma
MYSTERY
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Submitted to Contest #5 in response to the prompt: 'You overhear something you weren’t meant to. What happens next?'

I wasn’t meant to hear it.

It was a Thursday evening, late autumn. The sun had ducked below the rooftops by the time I reached the nursing home. I usually visited Uncle Ray on Saturdays, but guilt is a persistent thing—and I hadn’t seen him in weeks.

Meadowview Haven was quiet, cloaked in the gentle sterility of old age: the muted hum of fluorescent lights, the scent of antiseptic and talcum powder. I walked past the empty recreation room, down the corridor with the crooked painting of sailboats, and turned right toward Room 109—Uncle Ray’s.

That’s when I heard it.

I paused outside the staff break room. The door was almost closed, but not quite. It wasn’t snooping. Not exactly. I was just passing. But something in the tone of the voice inside—tense, hushed—froze me mid-step.

“She’s not going to last the week,” a woman said. “It’s in the chart. But he’s still signing the checks.”

A pause.

“We hold the paperwork till she goes. Then process the transfer. Standard.”

Another voice. A man this time.

“And if someone finds out? If the son notices?”

“He won’t. She’s practically comatose. And it’s not like the old man knows what day it is.”

Laughter. Brief. Sharp.

I backed away from the door, pulse hammering.

I didn’t mean to hear it. I didn’t want to.

But now I couldn’t unhear it.

Uncle Ray was half-asleep when I arrived. I sat beside him in the cracked vinyl chair, trying to focus on his wheezing breaths and not on what I’d just heard.

Comatose. Chart. Transfer.

It wasn’t about him. I knew that. It was about someone else—another patient. Someone vulnerable, who couldn’t defend herself. But it didn’t make it any easier to swallow.

“Uncle Ray?” I asked, quietly. His eyelids fluttered. “Do you know anyone named Clara?”

He coughed, winced, then nodded. “Sweet lady,” he rasped. “Two doors down. Used to be a teacher. Always wore lavender.”

Room 111.

I left after a while, promising to return Sunday. But as I walked past Room 111, I slowed. The door was ajar, barely. Inside, I could see a small form under a quilt, unmoving. Machines beeped gently beside her.

I leaned closer. Her chest rose and fell slowly. She wasn’t gone. Not yet.

But she looked like someone they were already forgetting.

That night, I couldn’t sleep. My thoughts knotted around themselves, replaying every word I’d overheard. What did they mean by “transfer”? What “checks” was she still signing?

The next morning, I made excuses to leave work early. Drove to Meadowview Haven with a knot in my gut. I needed answers.

I stopped at the front desk and asked about Clara in Room 111.

“She’s stable,” the receptionist said, flipping through a folder. “Comfort care. Her son handles her finances.”

I hesitated. “Is he… around?”

She glanced up. “Hasn’t visited in over a month. Lives out of state.”

I thanked her and walked away, heart pounding. That wasn’t standard. That wasn’t right.

I went to Room 111 again. Clara was still there, still breathing. A nurse I didn’t recognize came in and adjusted her IV.

“Excuse me,” I said, summoning courage. “Has her family been notified about her condition?”

The nurse frowned. “I assume so. Why?”

“No reason,” I said, too quickly.

But my suspicion had turned to certainty. They were waiting for her to die to process something financial—maybe a fund transfer, or a home sale. Something profitable.

And she had no voice left to stop them.

I spent the weekend doing something I’d never done before: investigating. I found public property records for a Clara E. Hollis. A small home on Sycamore Street, owned outright. I searched probate laws. Learned how delayed filings could be used to forge posthumous authorizations. I even called a friend of a friend who’d interned at a law office.

By Sunday night, I had a rough picture.

Clara’s power of attorney had been signed under questionable conditions. The son hadn’t visited in weeks, but somehow her assets were being shifted. And the staff? At least two people were helping hide it.

I couldn’t prove it. Not yet. But I could do something.

Monday morning, I returned to Meadowview Haven.

I printed out the property records, a copy of a letter template from a legal rights advocacy site, and slipped it all into an envelope labeled “URGENT: Clara Hollis.”

Then I walked into the office of the facility director and asked for five minutes.

She looked up, surprised. “And you are?”

“A concerned friend,” I said.

I handed her the envelope and spoke calmly. “This patient’s financial and legal affairs are being manipulated. I overheard two staff members discussing her impending death and the delay in filing certain documents. I’ve included what I believe to be early indicators of elder fraud.”

The director’s face stiffened.

“If nothing’s going on,” I said, “you’ll have nothing to worry about. But I’ve also sent a copy of this to the State Elder Services board.”

She didn’t say a word. Just nodded. Once.

I left.

Weeks passed.

I visited Uncle Ray on Saturdays again, bringing coffee and stories. But I also visited Clara. Sometimes just to sit. Sometimes to read. She never woke, not really. But her fingers twitched when I played old jazz through my phone. I chose to believe that meant something.

Then, one rainy Wednesday evening, I got a call from a number I didn’t recognize.

It was Clara’s son.

He sounded stunned. Said he’d flown in two days ago. Said there was a state audit. Said someone had tried to sell his mother’s house without legal authorization—and a whistleblower’s report had stopped it cold.

“She’s still here,” he said. “Still fighting. Thank you. I don’t know who you are, but thank you.”

I didn’t need thanks.

Clara passed away peacefully a month later, with her son at her side.

At the funeral, I stood at the back. I didn’t know her favorite color or her favorite song. But I knew she had once taught children how to read. That she’d worn lavender. That she had mattered.

After the service, her son approached me. I was about to slip away, but he stopped me.

“You heard something,” he said quietly. “Something you weren’t supposed to.”

I nodded.

“Why’d you act on it?”

I thought for a moment.

“Because someone needed me to.”





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Beautifully written! I really enjoyed the depth and emotion in your story — I have given full 50 points to your well deserved story! Would love your thoughts on my story too—Overheard at the Edge of Goodbye: https://notionpress.com/write_contest/details/6116/overheard-at-the-edge-of-goodbye

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